We're all waiting for ya! Can't wait to see Jamie drive everyone mad! ;)

This is really good!

Heh. Please update soon!

Bye,
Lisette

Oh my god. The world must be coming to an end because I just found your biggest weakness and can now use it agains you. You made a typo :) HA, now drive yourself crazy and try to find it. I KNOW YOU WILL. Lol Im so mean. Now, onto what I like about this chapter, I really like the charecter Jamie. I think you are smart to have Austin call YOU Jamie in real life cuz then he might go retarded and actually think your name is Jamie and then he cant stalk you or look u up. XD Lol.
“No, you idiot. I’m a guy with the body of a female. It’s truly a nightmare.” replied Jamie, her voice dripping with sarcasm.

I love it. BTW, "dripping with sarcasm" is my line. LOL use it, I feel famous. Did you come up with that on your own or r u using it cuz I said that on the txt i sent you. LOL idc, its awesome and I think you used it well. Im using it in RED EYES tho. And if you r not the author reading this, RED EYES, is the book I am wwriting (The author knows cuz shes my bestest-est friend) And Yeah... Lol.
(This part u wont understand unles u are the author of this book.)

when they talk about the vamp teeth and Luke finds out theyre real:

Luke: Are you kidding me?
Tooth Guy: Yes.
Luke: Oh good! You really scared me there.
TG: You idiot! Can't you see I'm absolutely dripping with sarcasm?
Luke:(Whispers to Dell): I dont like this guy, lets go!
Lol, do u like it? Luke is suck a MAN DITZ. LOL. U dont get to dump Paul until the next book) SORRY.
Ok, enough about my book. LOL/. I love yours.
~Mabbie. (Yes, I'm the authentic Mabbie. Now peeps who arent the author: I am the REAL Mabbie, so bask in your glory of reading a review from THE AUTHENTIC MABBIE!LOL!! ROFLMAO NOOB. Ok,. that was dramatic. "I like drama but I can control myself" PSHT I DONT THINK SO> NOB. lol im done. :) ... *Smily dots*

Oh my god. LOL. I really enjoyed this one. "she could have been a pancake in a former life," That is the funniest thing I have ever heard. XD OMG. lol You are a great writer. :) LOL please keep me ROFLing. Heh
Will you save me a spot at lunch?
~Mabbie (BTW, if you are NOT the author reading this, YES, I am the Mabbie from her profile. Meh. Thats me. Yup. Im famos. Im gonna close the parenthesis now.)

Oh. My. God. I love it. "Jamie" I love the charecter Jamie, I really think she is a hilarious charecter. "I came from the ceiling and i dont have any clothes" I love it, I'll show you a sweet dream, you have a great sense of humer and i think you are a great writer. You're also a great friend, even though I'm not supposed to know you. 0_0. lol you are very creative in making the charecters. "Near Naked Traveler." heh. I just think you should tell me the end *heh* I think you should add me to the story. Heh
~Panamoncreel(MADZ)

hahaha dude hes gunna get BITCH SLAPPED by those 2 whores lol

Hey, this was really funny! When are you going to put up a new part? Soon I hope!

Fascinating stuff. I see real character here, which is hard to find on this site.

Omigosh, I'm dazzled by this chappie!

Actually, by your story in general. please, keep writing! I'm looking forward to the story (and it's future ;D(

LONG CHAPTERS!! -squees and hugs you- You're getting SO much better, I'm so proud!! :D

--darkspines-Nova~

You are seriously turning out to be one of my favorite authors on Fanfiction, no lie!

And no, I am not just saying that, simply because we are friends. (ARE we still? After Taryn's inccident at camp, do you still like me? I hope so...:/) I am convinced you write better than me!

I'm excited about reading this, please, please, continue!

And call me. I'm lonely. ;-;

--darkspines-Nova~

haha poor William people are always kicking that poor puppy! lmao I can't beleive sh tripped on him...I would probably do the same, Will is just a piece of Fat lard...GReat chapter can't wait for the next one!

I love this chapter! And I'm waiting for the next one ^^.

Bye,
Lisette

lol I love Jamie she reminds me of myself. I like how she started pounding on jack and kicking his arse! then she's all normal with will asking where his room is. It was as if a blonde falling from the sky was normal for Will lmao you think he would have questioned how she knew his name well...Will is sorta dumb in the first movie...I can't wait for the next chapter!

i really like this story.the timing of it is really good plz update