great story. Havent seen 'Jediz and Jinxes' but it sounds kool. keep up the good work

THIS IS VERY FUNNY

I thought the part about not letting Voldemort or his kind in with exceptions for HALO tournaments was funny, and the description of Obi wan as a CG character. "you're more stylized than normal, your features are smoother." And Obi -wan's comment, " I'll be back to normal in time for episode three."

Very cute. You've captured both of their voices very well.

that was kinda kwel. wens the next chapter out?

I like this so far. I like how you have kept to the character's in the fan film, yet you added a personal touch as well. You've also added a little bit more character on the page then what we can see on the screen.

[joker/] I like that.

Suggestions for continueing the story: You've called it 'The clone wolves' so a possible voldemort/dooku/sidious plot line?

Pretty much the possibilities are endless. Just grab any popular sci fi/fanasy film at random and splice it in.

cute!