Honestly? I like it. But I gotta tell you, it's reminding me a lot of a story I read some time ago, in the Frank community here on . I'm not accusing anything, merely pointing that out. Otherwise - I see you're continuing it, and that's great. ;)

It is actually pretty good... I like it...and I hope to read anew story you write.

"Kevin? Huh, must have been another fling of his."
Lol. I hope Kevin doesn't freak too bad when he sees this. He asked for it though.

The pearls!!
Frankie's back. How old is Shayna supposed to be?

That was intense.
I love that last line.

Brad, how could you? To your own child, even!
That was a lot of cursing in one paragraph...

O! Exciting...I love how Shayna found the box.
'Brad and Janet Majors and Dr. Everett Scott found in a Denton parking lot in womens lingerie.'
Lol. I'm gonna keep reading now.

OMG Frankie's such a flirt! *Giggling Madly* I like this.. I think I'll continue reading!