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TrucyWright15
2009-05-07 . chapter 6
Aw,i love it!
I really like this story!!:D
Noo!Apollo singing no!If Apollo sings,tomorrow will rain! xD
Very cute!:D
Bye!
Pandums c:
2009-04-06 . chapter 6
Great story so far, I really like it!

And well for songs, I'm not quite to sure, are they going to be serenading eachother? XD
YinYangWhiteTiger
2009-03-13 . chapter 6
X3... I love it. But i can't stand the idea that Trucy and Apolloi are little ooc. But i believe Polly had a very sad past :(

update soon XD
helan
2009-02-16 . chapter 1
i really love this story! you should update soon or make more stories :)
BlackCrystalRose
2009-02-13 . chapter 6
Apollo=I like that Girl by Leon Thomas/Thunder by Boys Like Girls
Trucy=Let's hear it for the boy By Stunners

Great Story! If you DO update, I'll be in the wings, waiting to comment on another great chapter!
Karsten69
2009-01-16 . chapter 6
This fanfic is promising. but you do have a habit of writing 'all right' and 'all ready' instead of 'alright' and 'already'. and the story is good. a good song would be 'I should be so lucky' by Kylie Minogue. I deep, touching and romantic song.
Chiyo And Osaka Fan
2009-01-06 . chapter 6
Is this the end and if it is...it's a great story!
DreamBigToFallHard
2009-01-03 . chapter 6
*oh*
im totally diggin' the story

and i personally think that you should write another chapter
...
or even continue it into a longer story,
full of luv conflicts and secrets and stuff

im mean really! its soo possible you did super on the last 6 chps, that if you dont continue its like a crime

youll here from my lawyers

hahaha

but once again just my opinion...

settin that aside, if you do continue to write (which i hope you do cuz there is only like two Teen rated trolly stories)
do you think you can add more scenes in the school!

i TOTALLY luv high school fanfics

XD
~a dedicated fan
KurukiXV
2008-12-21 . chapter 6
I think this chapter was great and that last line in the chapter was frickin' awesome. I would like to see an epilouge or another chapter, depending on where you want the plot to go. Awesome sauce all around!
KurukiXV
2008-10-23 . chapter 5
I have to say, although I love the idea of Apollo and Trucy as brother and sister, I also like the idea of them being a couple. they're so adorable. and that 'strip tease'... quite amusing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Chiyo And Osaka Fan
2008-10-09 . chapter 5
Yay great chapter and yay cliffhanger!
Chiyo And Osaka Fan
2008-09-11 . chapter 4
Awesome just so awesome!
Holly Unending
2008-08-26 . chapter 4
SUPERGOODLUCKWISHESFORSCHOOL!!
Aargh, I'm back in school too... *dies* I really hope you have a nice easy schedule, although that's partly selfish because I really want you to update. xD Lol'd at "that the other side of the street was really a lot more interesting than most people give it credit for." Cuteness and love and smiles all around! I "aww'd" too, right after I finished squealing at Flirty!Apollo. (Why is my review getting so long? ;_;) Last thing, the format worked fine for me. Hope to read more soon!
KurukiXV
2008-08-26 . chapter 4
I just finished playing through the game like two hours ago. I loved the ending when Trucy and Apollo found out they were related. But I also like that your fic gives a different take on a possible relationship for the two of them.
BloodScale
2008-08-25 . chapter 4
>8D ANOTHER TROLLY SUPPORTER, I SEE. good, could always use moar trolly. XD
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