 TrucyWright15 2009-05-07 . chapter 6Aw,i love it!
I really like this story!!:D
Noo!Apollo singing no!If Apollo sings,tomorrow will rain! xD
Very cute!:D
Bye! |
 Pandums c: 2009-04-06 . chapter 6 Great story so far, I really like it!
And well for songs, I'm not quite to sure, are they going to be serenading eachother? XD |
 YinYangWhiteTiger 2009-03-13 . chapter 6X3... I love it. But i can't stand the idea that Trucy and Apolloi are little ooc. But i believe Polly had a very sad past :(
update soon XD |
 helan 2009-02-16 . chapter 1 i really love this story! you should update soon or make more stories :) |
 BlackCrystalRose 2009-02-13 . chapter 6 Apollo=I like that Girl by Leon Thomas/Thunder by Boys Like Girls
Trucy=Let's hear it for the boy By Stunners
Great Story! If you DO update, I'll be in the wings, waiting to comment on another great chapter! |
 Karsten69 2009-01-16 . chapter 6This fanfic is promising. but you do have a habit of writing 'all right' and 'all ready' instead of 'alright' and 'already'. and the story is good. a good song would be 'I should be so lucky' by Kylie Minogue. I deep, touching and romantic song. |
 Chiyo And Osaka Fan 2009-01-06 . chapter 6Is this the end and if it is...it's a great story! |
 DreamBigToFallHard 2009-01-03 . chapter 6*oh*
im totally diggin' the story
and i personally think that you should write another chapter
...
or even continue it into a longer story,
full of luv conflicts and secrets and stuff
im mean really! its soo possible you did super on the last 6 chps, that if you dont continue its like a crime
youll here from my lawyers
hahaha
but once again just my opinion...
settin that aside, if you do continue to write (which i hope you do cuz there is only like two Teen rated trolly stories)
do you think you can add more scenes in the school!
i TOTALLY luv high school fanfics
XD
~a dedicated fan |
 KurukiXV 2008-12-21 . chapter 6I think this chapter was great and that last line in the chapter was frickin' awesome. I would like to see an epilouge or another chapter, depending on where you want the plot to go. Awesome sauce all around! |
 KurukiXV 2008-10-23 . chapter 5I have to say, although I love the idea of Apollo and Trucy as brother and sister, I also like the idea of them being a couple. they're so adorable. and that 'strip tease'... quite amusing. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Chiyo And Osaka Fan 2008-10-09 . chapter 5Yay great chapter and yay cliffhanger! |
 Chiyo And Osaka Fan 2008-09-11 . chapter 4Awesome just so awesome! |
 Holly Unending 2008-08-26 . chapter 4SUPERGOODLUCKWISHESFORSCHOOL!!
Aargh, I'm back in school too... *dies* I really hope you have a nice easy schedule, although that's partly selfish because I really want you to update. xD Lol'd at "that the other side of the street was really a lot more interesting than most people give it credit for." Cuteness and love and smiles all around! I "aww'd" too, right after I finished squealing at Flirty!Apollo. (Why is my review getting so long? ;_;) Last thing, the format worked fine for me. Hope to read more soon! |
 KurukiXV 2008-08-26 . chapter 4I just finished playing through the game like two hours ago. I loved the ending when Trucy and Apollo found out they were related. But I also like that your fic gives a different take on a possible relationship for the two of them. |
 BloodScale 2008-08-25 . chapter 4>8D ANOTHER TROLLY SUPPORTER, I SEE. good, could always use moar trolly. XD |