Haha, that's genius. I've never seen something like this in the fandom (I've seen male pregnancy, but that's as close as I've come). I love that you made Lucius a woman. Thanks for sharing.

this one is messed

Oh wow! A LordJingles update! What a rare thing!

Anyways, I giggled at this chapter. Half the population being gay? I would have thought that would have been more obvious.

Great job, hope you update soon, or make a second Smart Potter, or something. I don't know, but you're good at writing, and you need to do more of it.

(looks like a reporter type, paper pad and pen included)*raises hand* question? i don't get the obliviate me part...is it continued later on? or...oh...i kinda get it, ideas for stories no?...meh, keep up the work.

very nice fics

Oh wow you're back. Woo! I'm assuming that this cliffhanger ending means you will be working on new material? If so, awesome! If not, ;_;.

Alright, now that that's out of my system, story review! I really like the idea of legilimency, and the exploring of people's minds. However, that's a bit harsh, don't you think? Everyone died but Harry? Ouch. Manipulative!Dumbledore is a very interesting character, methinks. Good job writing him. Anyways, I look forward to reading more of this story, hopefully soon!

mhmm...*rereads chapter 15 over a few times* this must be like to be obliviated. that or this is the first chapter of a story. *confused* i still don't get it...*shrug* looking forward to the second part.

o, interesting. Sad that Ginny died though.
Looking forward to more.

I got one thing to say Hedgehog. Some cute little puff's pet they could not part from.

u should soo make a 'harry potter is death' story from this coz im sure loads o people would read it as ur an obviously a very good comody writer :D !

This... Is DAMN good **... Hope you continue, especially the Ascended Harry/Luna thingie... Love it. Worst come to worst, maybe he can create Crumplehorned Snorkacks and Wrackspurts and whatnot for her? Oh, that would be so romantic!

Great ficts. I loved how unique they were. Update soon!

ROTFLMAO!

Oh, that last chapter was just priceless. I enjoyed reading your story seeds. I can't remember the last time I laughed so much.

Voldemore of the Dance, indeed.

I look forward to more ideas.

Gabrielle

Woo! I like this series, definitely continue this. I want to see Nagini get the ** scared out of her. MOAR.

Woo! I like this story arc, Harry kicking ** and taking names! Luna is also one of my favorite characters, right after Sirius and the twins.

Also, I ** LOVE The Princess Bride! As soon as I realized you were writing the script, I started laughing so hard I could barely read on. Bravo. On with it, then!