*Applauds*

Wonderful fic that gives us a fresh view of Fate and everything else without deviating.

Truly beautiful.

Regards
SA

Well written and beautiful. Good imagery, character interaction, word choice, and sentence structure.

Corrections:

"You hugged your knees to yur chest" your chest.

“Arf-" Quotation mark at the end.

"The Jewel Seed seemed to explode then, releasing waves of pure energy to great that it shook the buildings around them." too great.

"My small couragous words cross that sky" courageous.

"That promise between just the two of usIs an unchanging eternal magic" us Is.

Personally I thought it was a good story. A nice way to show the season 1 all together. You did have one typo, in the first bold part it says "You hugged your knees to yur chest" I think you meant your chest. Hope you are feeling better.

Too long and draggy? It's not as bad as you think ;)
I quite enjoyed the way you write it, reminds me of both of them in their childhood. A bit nostalgic I suppose. Anyhoo get well soon!

It was really good, I liked it =)

Remembering all those things they passed together, the most enjoy on first season XD

Greetings :)

Well, well, soldier...

What the Hell are you talkin' about, son? This thing was B-E-A-U-tiful!
A very good resume of Season 1 from Fate's POV. Good work, marine.

And what? There's a part 3 for "Under the Table"? AW3SOME!
'Looking forward to it.
Oh, and it says here this thing's In Progress, or did you just forget to put Complete? Will there be more? In that case, update ASAP! That's an order!

Oh, and get better soon.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Considering how I already left you a bunch of comments, I don't really know what else to say... XD I still really like the "The promise of a new beginning" as an ending line. It gives a hopeful, happy feeling.

And you are welcome. Love you too. =D