Loved. It.

XD hot, romantic and well written

Lovely. I love how it encompassed the hatred they both have for being 'bent', and yet they still come together at the end without being girly. Merlin, I hate when they're girly. ;)

You captured the UST very, very well. Likewise the fears of teenaged boys attracted to one another. I thought the entire fic outstanding until the last few lines when it resolved to tenderness too quickly and easily.
This is excellent writing:
Remus' whole jaw aches, the pain shooting to his teeth and lips. It's a numbing pain, one that seems to dull the pounding in his head. He takes sharp breathes as he follows Sirius, his chest heavy against his own lungs. He tries to swallow, but his mouth is dry and sticky. An unsettling feeling curls in the pit of his stomach, tingling and twisting. He won't admit to himself why he feels this way, tries to block out the sensation of Sirius' chest against his own.

not much to say. except that i like it, as usual.

Loved the kiss. Intense and powerful and oh-so-hot.
I was a little surprised at the level of 'nastiness' in Sirius' unprovoked attack but I do think I understand what you were doing with it. Correct me if I'm way off track...was he attacking the boy due to his own confusion about his sexuality hence the long, meaningful look at Remus? And perhaps to draw Remus' attention to himself as a child would - that 'all attention, even negative attention, is good' thing? And to release a little of that Black frustration?
As one of your other reviewers said, it *seems* OOC for what we all think we know about Sirius but who's to really say what's OOC? We fill in the blanks ourselves, don't we? The beauty of fanfiction! :-)
I loved the story. You write beautifully (especially that kiss...did I mention it was hot?)

I thought the kiss was good, but I think that Sirius was a bit TOO mean. I got the impression from the books that Sirius was only truly horrible to Snape and he just pulled pranks on other people, not hexing them for no apparent reason.

Excellent. I love that Sirius is mean, in so many fics he's not really at all, which doesn't make sense.
You can fit so much personality into these characters in such a short space! Impressed, as usual.

rathwynnG

Aw xD Just so...

Perfect =)

Really good!

-2Padfoot00Moony8

wow..this was amazing. i just loved it. i think you made a mistake though, it's sb/rl NOT SS/rl. anyway. it was really great. how you described the kiss was great and it seemed very real and blunt and just, the charcters so i dunno. real. fantastic job. the angst made it better but i loved the happy ending. write more, you're a really talented writer!