I love it. I love it. ^_^ twisted but oh so plausible. You truly are amazing. Don't ever stop writing.

thi was awesome.

Awsome oneshot.

Very nice. Really really nice.

Maybe you can write an expanded story with more plots and stuff? Anyway, kudos. :)

This is a very powerful story. I enjoyed reading it, and all the implications that go with it. You truly are a very clever author.
-Kat

Whoa demented child, the poor people did not stand a chance.. But oh well they got what they deserved in the end.

Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.

Creepy as hell but really fun to read! At the end, I wanted to feel bad that he was going around slaughtering the innocent... but I didn't. 'Cause you're a good enough writer to make us feel like that's - if not okay - understandable. And it was.

Damn, I'm glad I don't live there. =D

-Viskii

Great story!

Shet, that was dark. But sweet. Heh heh.

Loved the story! :D This kind of Naruto appeals to me greatly.

wow you write great oneshots that could be even better as full stories...

wow, that was deep. i especially liked the line " Akuma would show them, all of them, that sealing a demon into a child was never a good idea." it was very well written. ja ne

My only regret is not hearing the convo between the demon and the boy.

At this point, they must have a very good rapport. Both are angry they exist as they do, and both will kill everyone for the "lolz".

I must say, this fits perfectly with the 9-Tails persona.

Not a lil' fox who makes idle threats and throws around a few sarcastic jibs. This is a demon, and if it had to be inconvenienced or even trapped forever in a human vessel, everyone will pay.

Good morale story. This is like a macabre Goldy Locks. lol

AH Shit!


Sad but true, one always reaps what they sow.