Very cool...just amazing.

Gave me goosebumps!

This is great! Perfectly Ranma 1/2 and perfectly Speaker For The Dead.

Good story. I wanted more. I liked how you portrayed Ranma's presence. I also enjoyed how you told your story without the needless rehashing of either works.

Thoroughly enjoyable.

I thought it was very reminiscent of the real Speakings.

There was actually almost no unnecessary sections of the fic. The only parts I thought excessive were the parts with Graff and the General who's name escapes me, though they were reminiscent of the conversations in Ender's Game too.

A fascinating little piece of fanfiction. I liked it. Ender taught Anything goes. I think you did a good job of it, translating the real way Ranma learns to how Ender would have needed to learn from Ranma. And the tranformation at the end, wonderful. Thank you for this story.

It's been almost 25 years since I read "Ender's Game" in an anthology edited by Asimov. This story has surely brought back some good memories.

Thanks for a well-written story. I'm intrigued enough to go look-up and finally read "Speaker for the Dead".

This was good work for a short piece.

Bit short, and lacking in detail, but overall well delivered. Nice job.

Executed perfectly.

I was worried how you would approach the speaking but now it ends as an excellent oneshot. Best leave the actual book to the imagination as Orson Scott Card did for the Hivequeen and the Hegemon.

[x] Add Story to Favorites

Not bad, but I was expecting something a bit more personal about Ranma; it could also have used a bit more descriptive detail.

Nice

pretty good story... definitely unique...

Bravo! Well written, good story. It captured some of the basic essence of both Speaker for the Dead and some of the better Ranma fanfic out there ('Comes the Cold Dragon' comes to mind, for some reason - heh). I look forward to seeing your next project.

There were a couple of misspellings notable at the beginning of the story but they were few and far between. Good technical marks, too.

Please Please PLEASE write more of this...good god i had never even considered a crossover of this...magnitude. ...YOU MUST WRITE MORE...FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE...


umm...right, sorry about that, gut reaction and all that.

Very VERY promising start, although i must say you seem to have started at the end...somewhat...i would see this being just the prologue and the next chapter being the start of the story, wherein Ender and Ranma meet in person and the story starts (narrative style, ranma speaking)...this could go on god only knows how many chapters, then ending with ranma dying and the last lines would be the start of Enders speach (need not be written)...perfect...have him start his speach and then trail off just like this...

If you cant tell...i really want you to write this story =D