I liked the idea that you imposed in this fanfic story. I also liked the pairings that you had here. However, I was a bit if-y about Aura/Silver Knight. I thought that was a bit strange lol. But it was alright. Also, I think many of the characters are slightly OOC. Tsukasa is a bit more timid and so is Subaru. Mia's character was alright but Elk wasn't as shy as I thought he would usually be. I image Balmung being a bit more serious. In all, I really liked the idea. I only wish that you would have add some more details with the dialogues. Thanks for posting.

Nice I like it you should write more