Ooh, I really really like that one. The decriptions of fire were amazing, and I like how you described it first and then had the person get bitten. Very creative. ]

That was really cool, I like the writing on this one. ]

Are these based off of specific characters, or just random people that are bitten?

wow, those were really really good, all 3 chapters i mean.

Wait? She changed in only a few moment? I tought it was around a 2-3 day timespan for the change depending on how close the blood was to the heart.

And I think the do would've barked, or even immediatly flee from the original vampire by instinct.

will

Wow, that was really good! I like it because it could apply to a lot of different characters and stuff. ] You write beautifully- it wa really interesting and you describe things well. I'd love to see you do something with the Twilight characters, though! ]