love it!

I am Rose Weasley. Hear me sob. Wow, I love the little argument in Rose's head! I read your profile, and I'll admit, until the books were over I refused to read a story with a 'canon' ship I didn't like because I refused to believe it was canon until they actually got together! (Can you tell who I mean?) I am a huge Dramione shipper, BUT I have accepted that there is no hope for them unless the whole of, well, most of the series is disregarded. So, now, I focus on their children and what could possibly happen for them as there really is no canon shipping going on! Also, I am an American and the mom versus mum thing bothers me. If you're going to write about British people, write the damn dialogue like THEY (or you, I guess) would say it! I will admit to having...ah...slipped up in my own personal writing that is not published on because it is currently absolutely terrible! I need a britishisms coach! My dialogue is terrible as well. And my descriptions. I am a much better editor than I am a writer. My friend is the writer, not me. I get the ideas, I'll write the beginning, she'll write the middle, and another friend'll write the end. Then we'll go through and cover the pages in different colored inks and never look through it again. Yeah... But as for your story, FABULOUS!

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS AWESOME
and hilarious
and adorable!
I love rose!
she is like the perfect combination of ron and hermione
and the whole malfoy/weasley thing is just perfect
'at least it's not canaries this time' AH!! so cute

great
really really

This is good. It's funny, and I like how you haven't completely finished the story - you haven't had the common ending of the two of them getting together.

Well done

Ha! Love it! Poor Rose, we've all been there...

Haha. I love Rose rambling. Great work.

oh my god. i think about one paragraph down i forgot it was rose weasleys thoughts instead of yours. this is just you and theres no denying it
"It will start like that. Me, getting just a bit flustered when he talks to me, or when his shirt rides up a little bit… laughing too hard at his jokes, even on the rare occasion that they’re crap. I’ll end up being that creepy girl who stares at him at every available occasion. Or even just at the back of his head, or his feet, or his hands or something."
ITS YOU!
"if he really does fancy me as my friends are absolutely convinced (and wrong)… "- RIght!!
im dissapointed in you.

Very, very cute. I almost caught myself laughing outloud at some of Rose's thoughts. You captured someone falling in love with their best friend quite well. (And I'm speaking from experience here) Great job!

-honda

Teehee. Hilarious and a very fun read. Loved it.

An interesting and amusing story. Keep writing.