Careful of the small grammatical errors. Other than that, it sounds promising.

I just reread this, and it made me cry again. It's that good. Please finish it. ;_;

I was never expecting to add an M-rated story to my favourites. Upon realizing that this story was only rated for horror and coarse language, I knew I loved this story. Now I need to reread this story, it's so great. All your readers are waiting for you to update, too. {P} Are you going to update soon?

2 words.

Literary Masterpiece.

I hope you continue, this is really good.

Yay! Thank you SO much for writing more. I can finally rest knowing who the killer is. -

Man, I was wondering if you'd ever update this again. Bwaha. I still love this fic so. I did not see that twist coming, I must say. I'll hafta go back and reread everything and see how it all fits tagether.
Ya know, I dunno if I ever sent or mentioned these pics before, but I doodled two pics based off this fic of yers...
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YOU UPDATED! 8D Oh, these tears of joy...
...
*is speechless*
...Gosh, what is there to say? Didn't see that coming. There is no emoticon for what I am feeling. Glad to know you are alive and that you are going to finish this. And don't you dare call this crap! It's one of the best written stuff in the Mario section...and there isn't much. You have such talent, Pisces. Don't let go of it!

please update. 8( even if you're "too old" for writing fanfics. i just...i need to know who the killer is before i die, that's ALL i ask! you can't start something this good and suspenseful and not finish. there should be laws against that.
please finish?

Why won't you update?
ARG! And I'm too stupid to figure out who the killer is!
If I can't figure it out, I'll go insane!
PLEASE UPDATE! It's really good and I wanna know what happens next

...I hope she reads this...

It's been a year...

Luigi: I've been lying in a hospital bed with a tortured soul for 14 freakin' months? O_o

Aw, it's all right, Weege. *pat pat* I'm sure she'll update soon...

...Right?

! UPDATE DAMNIT! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR 5 MONTHS AND YOU STILL HAVEN'T UPDATED! UPDATE!

Yay! I found it again! I loved this fic when I read it originally on yer site (I think) but it didn't have this many chapters and chapter 5 didn't work, but now I have da whole experience.

Eeeee I love this fic. It's so detailed and emotional and such an interesting take on the Mushroom Kingdom, it's just so terribly coooooool. I can't wait fer more.

I think I know who it is, but I wo'nt give it away.

But I have a question: Where's Wario? He seems to be the only overall-wearing Italian missing. Although I can see the problem of fitting him in such a serious fic...

So... you... gonna finish, or what?

I know who the killer is! It's...

Edward Gorey! Bwa ha ha!*laughs insanely, hugs and rocks herself, chanting* Must find blue, must find blue... O_o