The writing is good and i like the sweet but still sexy. Nice story Line :D

LOL

OMG I BET ITACHI AND KISAME ARE SCARRED FOR LIFE NOW! XDDDDD

WALKING IN ON SOMETHING LIKE THAT!

God it must have been horrible!

LOL

Sasuke WOULDNT be able to live without Naruto!...especially after that...

Lol I bet that apple was totally worth it

XDDDDDDDDDD

Kakashi and iruka are so cute together!

But maaaan Kakashi works fast...It only took him like a day to get: away from his guards once, and apple, Iruka, AND a new wash boy XDD

Sasuke and Naruto, Iruka and Kakashi, and just a hint of Kisame and Itachi... I LOVE IT!

I love the kakashi iruka part of the story... All this for an apple... Hahaha!

my god this was awosme and with kisame and itachi naruto and sasuke will live on together as couple who see eachother in the bathroom and orochimaru will be defeated!

Nice job spamming up the fanfic list.

Dumbass.

I loved these storys their so cute and poor Itachi and Kisame but if it was me I would probabkly be happy heh heh but still great job *thumbs up*

nice KAKASHI!

Really cute story! (Erk, bastard Orochimaru, Sasuke'll never prefer you over Naruto !)

WOOT! XD

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHYA! CH 1 WAS SO FUNNY AT THE END! POOR ITACHI AND KISAME! THAT WAS GREAT!

...THOSE TWO ARE SO LUCKY T.T ...

WHY! xD

you need a chapter where sasuke and naruto get married!

I love dis story... it kinda cute..i wan 2 read more..

aw...this story made me cry, geez, I'm such a girl...oh wait, I am. Hah! anyway, great story! WOOT!