Wow, I must seem like an idiot - this story's probably, like, ancient by now, and I JUST got the time to clean out my DevArt watches and find this. XDD Oh, well, better late than never, right?

Though I missed the song reference, (yay me! :D), I gotta say I like this story. ^^ Sure, SuperxSonic is...kind of new in my book, but I could see where it comes from. (Damn me and my gay pairing support. >< )

Very pretty short, Feniiku - definate fave! ^^

Nice, I don't remember too many Sonic/Super interactions and this is a cracker.

Wow, this is such a beautiful story. I've never read anything like this before, it's a unique take on the relationship between these two. I'm intrigued by the malevolent personality of the hero Super Sonic, it just adds so much depth to his character. And Sonic, with his feet off the ground, is at his mercy the whole time. My only complaints are that this was way to short; that we didn't really get a chance to understand the relationship between them, and that the descriptions maybe weren't as powerful as they could be. But still, this is amazing and beautiful in an incredibly unique way.

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Song reference?! WHERE?! Geez, I'm so bad at remembering song names... can sing them, but can't remember their names for the life of me...

'Kay, I should probably comment on the story now XD I love it! This sort of thing isn't usually written, so it was very original (big plus!). The writing's good, though it could've probably not hurt to add a bit of description (the fic was a bit too short).

Good job! I'm happy to be faving this XD

Ah, Evil Super Sonic. He rocks. None o' this helping people stuff. At the end of Sonic '06 I expected (hoped?) he'd just rip Elise's head off and then go HELP Solaris destroy the universe. If only.

Ahem, anyway, SENSIBLE feedback. Best part: the little bits you added in the description of the upper atmosphere. Sonic getting drenched by cloud vapour, then frozen by the chill of the air. Very good indeed.

Could do with improving: while it's very much the opposite of what I usually prescribe (and write), I think this could have been made yet superior with more thoughts & feelings. More emphasis Sonic's fear at being chased by the worst parts of himself, and rememberance of the evil that Super Sonic perpetuared. Stuff like that, to make it more atmospheric (lol, pun).