 Liane 2008-09-01 . chapter 1 You just made my day :-) After a while of not checking for new instalments (cause of course that's just when they appear), I come back and have two delicious stories to read about Sam and Pietro. As always, it just makes for such vibrant reading. You literally breathe life into all your characters, each with its very distinctive voice and it's an amazing feast which only leaves me begging for more (and it's Alex!! I'm so looking forward to hear what's happening with him). Till next time^^ |
 Minerva Solo 2008-08-02 . chapter 1Love insecure Pietro, and the attitudes of those around him towards it (Wanda, you rock). I like the way JP openly admits that he doesn't really want to move in together, but he'd give it a shot if that's what it took.
Oh, I hope JP and Alex did make out. I love the way they chummed up while Pietro was being avoidant. I guess Alex is completely out of the closet now? |
 2008-07-28 . chapter 1 My reaction to this story: Bwhahahahhaa!
I don't know where to start. I have to give you props for making reference to the story before it. I love how Pietro described the event as being "brain scarring". Oh yeah, I do need to go back and review that story, since I spent so much time laughing about the events it catalogued. **Trying to keep a straight face...failing...hehehehe!**
Pietro and Jean Paul are so cute, and Pietro is such a girl. Whenever a part is written in Pietro POV, I know I'm in for a good laugh. His thought process is so hilarious. Almost hot guy-wait a minute, this guy isn't hot enough to talk to me.
On Pietro trashing the house-- the rest of the Brotherhood sleeps like the dead lol. Lance--or Stupid Trailer Beast, hahahaha-- is a good friend, in his own way. He sensed something was up and instead of clobbering Pietro, like I would have done, he talked him down. I almost wished he would have called JP though.
On Wanda and Pietro-- aw. Lovin' how Wanda knew what was wrong and what to say. The relationship between the Maximoff twins has really come a long way. I would love to see some one-shots about them bonding, and how they feel about Magneto being so close. He's working at Xavier's school, right?
On JP's jealously-- that was kinda hot. He just comes off as a territorial alpha male protecting his mate. I love the warning. If you touch another human being while you are with me, I'll kill you. Geez, JP, psycho much? But then I thought: Well, he cares, lol.
Now, I did sense that JP was going to ask Pietro to move in at the beginning of the story when he first introduced the idea of going away to college. However, I remember in a previous story JP swore he'd kill Pietro if they lived together. So, I knew it wouldn't work out. I think you've captured some good scenes here dealing with a very pressing matter. JP and Pietro are in love, but they are not officially committed. They are reaching points in their lives where they have to decide where their relationship is going to go. They're going to have to get over themselves and say: We're a couple. Once they do that, things to come might be easier because at least they'll be able to present a truly united front against.
All that said, keep the stories coming. I'm being lazy and not reviewing them all as I should, but I am reading them ;). Thank you, as always, for sharing!
Take care!
Ebs |
 DoubleL27 2008-07-27 . chapter 1I really do love your take on X-Men: Evo - particularly Pietro. He would freak the fuck out over someone leaving. People don't leave Pietro, Pietro leaves people. Except when he can't and is forced to go back because of some whacked out feeling or some shit. Gets him every time.
Really enjoyed this with him and JP. Sex solves a lot for male characters, or is used as a tool to solve things and I like that expressed here. I loved the Pietro/Lance conversation, but you know how I feel about their friendship. All in all a delightful look at Pietro and his neuroses and his relationship with JP. I look forward to the next in this series. |