 Dustland 2009-09-23 . chapter 1D'aw. That was adorable. Good work. |
 BlackCrystalRose 2008-11-03 . chapter 1 Beautiful. Most definitely my favorite oneshot of this pairing (meaning ever!) I've ever read. |
 Keikun4283 2008-10-24 . chapter 1Nice one shot. Always a fan of these two. This fic was good but I hope you start updating your other one "The Laws of Seduction" I've read over what you have quite a few times now. |
 ami 2008-10-04 . chapter 1 completely adorable! I'm so glad that you write this seeing that this case was one of my favorites as Franziska and Phoenix were working together! beautifully written keep up the good work! |
 JPElles 2008-09-02 . chapter 1Funny. Keep it up. |
 samanthapoop 2008-08-18 . chapter 1Cute! I'm currently playing this part. |
 cottoncandyretards 2008-07-29 . chapter 1I'm at a loss for words right now. I'm stumbling between, "Aw!" and, "Adorable! -fangirl squeal-" to be honest with you. This was the first Franziska x Phoenix oneshot I've read and it's left a very good impression on me. I liked that it could be taken as a simple gesture of friendship or even the hinting of a future relationship. Good job!
-Akai |
 DCFG 2008-07-28 . chapter 1SDKFJSDF
THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY ADORABLEE |