Pwease write that lemon! Pwetty pwease?! Not that baby talk will help you write it... But lemons aside are we allowed to just come out and say sex scenes? you have a good story I'd like to see an anecdtoe about the twins when they realise Naruto is still alive like 5-10 years later and maybe a follow up on a grass vist and we may see those poison lillies eat Naruto up? Anyway i liked the story and i'm gutted about the lack of lemons but you win some you lose some i've faved it anyway ttfn!

"Uzumaki Naruto isn't the type to kiss and tell."

funny i thought that's the type he is considering how he tries to kiss up to sakura and explain the situations he gets in XD

but lovely story by the way. hope there's a continuation to it :]

keep it up!!

I guess you could also consider this having Naruto loosing his virginity his way

I think I know who you're talking about. Would Sayako Bizen be a certain royalty who had the misfortune of having her book signing at the same venue, on the same day, at the same time as Left Handed Mike?

Great one-shot.

wow

lol awesome story!

Funny, I never knew her name before I just "read" all the stories.

Awesome...Sheer awesome. Now if only you could ignore the delightful plot bunnies and finish some of your older works...

HAHAHA! Bizen, I tip my hat to you good sir. A great cameo ;)

Dude if you have a heart you will update this awesome story soon!

Good work and hope to see more.

LOL!

That last line is getting added to my favorite quotes

AWesome and completely hilarious.

When you first described Sayoko and gave her appearance I thought to myself 'no way' but then you dropped on us the last name of the star of /S/lut Girl and /S/lut Girl Extreme, HE DID O.O, BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA XD, I laughed so hard I almost passed out and still am for that matter.

You sir are a magnificent pervert who deserves a standing ovation 'clapping', Bravo...Bravo.

please update soon