GREAT job! ! I liked it!

TOO sexy! For some reason I love the "my God" reaction. It's like there can be nothing else to say...and even that can't cover it.

Random thing here but I was watching this leaked video of "Wolverine" trailer while reading this (going back and forth) and Gambit (my freaking fav X men character) showed up on the screen. So I was getting two things I love at the same time...Edward/Bella lemon AND Gambit. Then my brain fused Edward as Gambit. Gah...I know it's random.

Good one shot! :)

So I liked it... but the bad thing for me about it was...

I didn't picture Bella and Edward doing this...

I pictured Rupert Grint and Emma Roberts.

O.o

but it was good...

other than the nasty people doing it.

D:

*FANS SELF AND SWOONS* that says it all.

OME! i absolutly love your writing! you are one of my absolutly favorite writers. and i din't mean like i'm going to put you on my fave authors list you are right next to daddy's little cannibal (i don't know if you know who she is)! reading blind is my miniproject that story has it all drama love and edward so i can't wait to check out your other stories!

i absolutely love it! its so sweet yet sexy

Oh yes, very sexy!

This was schmexy! Rock on!

l;uv it. you're an amazing writer.

I like this. Not too overly done and OOC, but still sexy. :)

Nice lemon. :)

Of course it's in Ed's POV.

I'm really starting to think that Jay isn't short for Jessica and Alex is actually short for Alexandria. It would explain so much.