Interesting, I thought it was interesting but I am curious where you are going with it. I have been planning writing my own Clone Wars fan fic and I like how you started this one but I feel its just that, a start that needs to be continued so the reader actually knows what is going on lol ^-^ good though.

I love how you portray Ahsoka in such a mature, insightful way. Its neat how she can sense/see his internal struggle and how it troubles her though she doesn't fully understand why.

i really like it. it doesn't make ahsoka the irritating little girl who argues about everytinhg, which makes her seem more like nine than 14.

Yeah this is a really well written story. Nice insight on Ahsoka.

Hey, I think this is good. I wonder why there aren't more reviews? R2-D2106