very nice! where's the rest =)

Beautifully written. Very true to Jayne and River, I think. You gave me a silly smile. Thank you. Hope to hear more soon.
Kristina

Something is starting between Jayne and River..yay!

Please, MORE! It was amazing. I love Rayne!

Great story...keep it coming.

E! So cute! ^^ Jayne's jealous! And confused! ^^ There is no end to the awesomeness! Please update uber incredibly soon!
Love and cheers,
Rosie

Aw...that was so sweet! Toothache sweet. I can picture Jayne feeling left out but not really wanting to feel left out, acting like he doesn't care at all.
After reading this, I am greatly anticipating the next installment!

Aw...cute!
She's just disturbing his calm in all kinda ways, isn't she? This is the best kinda fluff; he just can't seem to help himself!
Please keep updating; I wanna know what happens next!

Ah, the beginnings of a romance not sought... I sincerely hope that you add to this. I will antipicate future installments!

cute!

very nice! I'm excited to see where these go!

Oh, I hope there's more! And the stinging in Jayne's chest ... does he have a heart after all??