Catholic upbringing, excitement for breaking dawn and procrastinating...? Get out of my head! lol Although, I suppose BD has been released now so the excitmeent is gone but still... I can relate.

I'm only tentatively dipping into the Tanya/Edward pond but this is really great! Well written, well put together. Great job! :)

Whoa... this is just, GUH. GUH. *tries to sound out GORGEOUS but is shocked into incoherency*

I have to say, it was the language that drew me. I can't quote because omg, I would quote the entire freaking story...

- ...he’s ashamed to admit that he’d do it all… over… again.
- ... deliciously saccharine in his state of moral decay.
- This is not biblical. It’s eternal.
- She dances through his days and nights like a recurring nightmare.

... Gorgeous. And thus, was the Fall of Man. Guh. Loved it. Will now read your other stories. But just for this one... God, you're in my favorites.

GORGEOUS. This was absolutely fabulous and amazing and UGHH.

I LOVED Sin; it was definitely my favorite of the six. The imagery was just breathtaking and flawless. The metaphor of "a raging collision of two storm fronts" is so perfect for Edward and Tanya, and "screaming guilty-pleasure screams into her throat" was just... yay. :)

But my favorite line(s) by far? "All thoughts of holy virgins fly from his head; he slips into a purgatory he’d rather not escape from. This is not biblical. It’s eternal."

You need to keep writing Edward/Tanya. :D

Alisa

Your writing flows really well. I also love how you split up the paragraphs.

I loved it! So different and original. Was that Tanya? Or Bella as a vampire? I thought it was Tanya but I am an idiot, so maybe not?

amazing. i love the idea of edward and tanya, not because they are "meant to be" or in love or anything like that, i'm a diehard edward/bella shipper, but this paioring is so utterly... delicious. it's forbidden and wrong and horrible and beautiful and i love the idea od edward succumbing into temptation. adore, adore, adore it.

-britt