So it was a Midori/Youko pairing, hm it was good. I like the idea too that Midori's first time was with Youko, excellent job with the pairing. Good work

O.O Shizuru and Elliot? HOT! Hm so Shizuru got experience from her, it would explain a lot. Loved this first chapter, hope the second is just as good

Wow)) I like it!!)
Nice and funny stoyr! Great thanks!

Nice job...I think you're onto something here. So much to explore with so many different characters. Can't wait for Nao...and maybe a Nina?

Please update soon!

Xan

That was a nice chapter, Midori is really understanding/bordline crazy.

LOL that was funny.

Hahha SHizuru and Elliot = great choice. ahh...Natsuki has another competitor besides Ein.

Hm...if that was the edited version, I can't imagine what the unedited version would be like. :D Nicely done.

With a teacher like that, no wonder Shizuru is the way she is. XD I especially loved the line “Those hands, should be registered as deadly weapons.”

Elliot you dog!! XD

Lol that was a first XD
very fun oneshot XD LUL'D at edible underwear

ahh you mean ahn lu?