LOVE! Ahahahaha! This made me lol.

OMG ROFL I HAD AN EXTREMELY BAD LAUGHING ATTACK WHEN I READ THIS IT WAS SO FUNNY AND WELL WRITTEN I COULD PICTURE WHAT WAS HAPPENING IN MY MIND SO WELL AND BOY DID I EVER LUAGH AT THE WIND THING AHAH SO BOYS GET OFF WITH THE WIND EH? LOLZ LOVELY FIC LOVED IT

Genius. This was effing genius! I'm still laughing my ass off!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *dies laughing* yees boys are weird XD but we loves them all the same

Absolutely hilarious, and everyone was in character. Love it!

This was hilarious!! Absolutely loved it!

The best yet. HILARIOUS. That last scene - my god, this stuff is beautiful!

Really good!

Adorable.

Repressed sasunaru...

I'm seriously so impressed by your writing skills.

And your plot development :)

Favorite moments:

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The first boy stepped into the second’s personal space and yelled only inches from his face, “I refuse to lose to you!”

A truly impressive display of the absolute antithesis of ninjutsu followed, wherein the two boys simultaneously tackled each other to the ground and proceeded to wrestle around in the dirt like amateurs, shouting out “jackass” and “moron” and other random insults as they did so.

(the absolute antithesis of ninjutstu - I love that!)

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“I’m stuck with you?” Naruto’s voice hit a pitch that could shatter glass. It echoed throughout the woods in a deafening cacophony that could be heard all the way back at camp.

“Ow.” Sasuke rubbed at his ears. “Maybe you can make high-pitched screaming your new ninjutsu.”

“Why would Kakashi-sensei do something like this?” Naruto ranted. “I didn’t ask to be tied to a cold-hearted bastard!”

Sasuke snorted disdainfully. “Teambuilding,” he reminded Naruto, filling that word with every fiber of cold-hearted bastardry that he could.

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The problem was that now the string was only half the length it had been before, and they hadn’t been able to move properly even then. This time it only took three paces for them to come to a frustrated halt.

Blue eyes warily met black ones.

“You know,” Naruto began hesitantly, “there’s only one way I can think of to make sure we’re not yanking each other around by the wrist.”

The vein in Sasuke’s left temple twitched. “Unfortunately,” he agreed.

“If you tell anyone about this, I’ll murder you,” Naruto insisted.

“Tch. I’d rather die than have anyone find out.”

Naruto glared. Sasuke glared. Fingers tensed and clenched before finally, reluctantly, reaching out to wrap around each other. Naruto and Sasuke both looked off to the side in embarrassment when they finally held hands.

“I really, really hate you,” Sasuke grumbled under his breath.

“This is humiliating.” Naruto’s cheeks flushed bright red. “And: Ugh! Your hand is clammy!”

“Well, yours is sweaty.” Sasuke, deprived of the power of his annoyed glare, looked furtively up into the trees. “We need to get this over with as quickly as possible.”

“Right. To camp!”

What was truly frightening, of course, was just how easy it was to move as one, now that their hands were clasped together.

--

And of course the whole awkward scene.

I'm so tired now...Just spent time reading all your stuff when I should have been doing homework..

Bad CC >:C



I'll have to check out your livejournal and friend you!

But now I'll leave you to read my reviews...

*nods* The wind is such a pervert. :snigger:

LOL OH MY GAWD YES THERE MUST BE MORE TEAM BUILDING EXERCISES! xD Kakashi is a genius! A GENIUS. And silly Naruto and Sasuke...they should know better than to blame the wind for their perversion! :'D

thanks to you, I've come to the conclusion that they are crazy, although you writde Naru/Sasu very well.

BWAHAHHAHAHHAHAH!
MWAHAHHAHAHH!
OH...GOD...-falls down- I could not stop laughing, for some reason. Man (or girl), I have to give you props for this. One of the best I've ever read...absolutely marvelous...

This was really good, i liked it a lot!^_^

Amazing work!:)

I love the SasuNaru in this. You should totally try and make a sequel to this...Have you made a sequel to it? Anyways, I'm trying to say that this is a wonderful way for a SasuNaru relationship to start, so if you if you have made a sequel, I would love to know, and if you ever do make a sequel, I would still love to know.

Sayonara