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Aruraya
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
Whoa.
You actually get it. This is the ONLY fic I've read where the Harley/Joker dynamic made COMPLETE sense, from both sides. And you actually managed to convey that relationship logically, clearly, and succinctly. Holy shit. Pardon me, but I'm seriously floored by your insight. And you managed to hit SpellCheck on your way in, too- something I never fail to appreciate on FFN.
I hope you know that EVERYONE who writes Harley/Joker should be asked to read this before they pen sixty thousand words of schizophrenic romance, tears, and rubber chickens. I, personally, am eternally grateful that you provided this epiphany before I wrote such a mess of my own.
Kudos, really. KUDOS. And five gold stars. Unbelievable.
Persian Rose
2009-06-24 . chapter 1
I got the Killing Joker reference! Yay - I'm on my way to being a true DC fan. ;)

Excellent story here, though. You really have the different sides of Harley mastered quite well. I think I agree with her about the Joker, though. He might not be as conniving as everybody thinks he is. I mean, he would certainly like to think so, but he's really just acting on instinct constantly and planning so that none of his faux-pas will result in permanent incarceration...

Fascinating. Applause!!
Anna McNarin
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
That's about the freakiest description of the relationship between Harley and Joker I've read in a long while.
Chortle
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
An excellent fanfiction. The writing being enticing and the characters staying very true to themselves with more insight to Joan Leland and to Joker & Harley's relationship. And some excellent points were made about the status of the relationship and about how Joker is always true in his actions and wont do anything he doesn't want to. Bravo.
Miss Malfaisant
2008-11-15 . chapter 1
This is odd.

It sort of left me with a feeling that disgust-induced bile is rising in my throat.

You switched tenses multiple times, and I could never tell whose point of view this is supposed to be from. These are things your should set out and determine before you start writing, not WHILE you are writing.

Also, there were multiple noticeable punctuational errors which, by the end, made my eyes begin to bleed.
WittyFae
2008-11-10 . chapter 1
*cough cough* um, hi. I'm an awful person who only just read this. But I DID read it now and I love it! An all too rare glimpse of the smart girl that put herself through Med school by her wits long enough to get an internship before she went crackers. I mean, she out shrinked a shrink. She's dangerously smart!

That rationalization is probably the most convincing i've heard yet, anyone could believe it. As someone who does frequently throws paper weights at people I can concur that acting on first instincts are usually genuine.

great job! I'll probably be playing catch-up with your stories and some others i've missed cause i'm a terrible person.
harleyQdoll
2008-09-26 . chapter 1
LOVVE IT!
great fic!
harley is my favorite!!
just loved how you wrote this!
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Redmage2
2008-09-15 . chapter 1
Wow, I really liked this! Your Harley makes an excellent point. The juxtaposition of the quotations is really nice, too.
KagomeHig715
2008-09-02 . chapter 1
OMg.. That was so cute!! I love it.. very good point also.. Please keep writing your fantastic fics.. your an amzazing author~
Anne Lessing
2008-08-30 . chapter 1
Genius. Pure genius.
MochaCocaFan
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Interesting!
DarknessinShadows
2008-08-07 . chapter 1
I really liked this story!
Twinings
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
That was just lovely, and while Harley seems to be thinking a little too clearly, it's still great to get inside her head like this.

-3.0
Liz
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
This was absolutely insightful! I loved it and I loved the way Harley made 'sense'. I'd love to see more on this, especially from Leland's view should you have Joker break Harley out of the Asylum.
Rumielf
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
Absolutely wonderful! I loved the way Harley shifted the conversation so abruptly by asking if Joan had ever wanted to hurt someone.

And at the end when she has managed to have Joan speechless by saying (with a great argument) that at least the Joker's actions toward her, good and bad, are genuine is lovely.

I enjoyed this quite a bit, hon. :)
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