Ah, the plot thickens! This fic is as great as ever, but i just realized somthing. There are only TWO cross-overs for Crystal Chronicles! Heh, I just may have to fix that.
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... Mabye i won't... But i digress, hehe.

I'm still sketchy on putting the details together, but it is pretty squee-inducing to see my name tucked in there. Thank you!

Thank goodness for Ardwynna! I do believe she's my favourite angel.

I haven't read many FF7 fanfictions so I find it difficult to comment on your portrayal of Sephiroth, but from what I know you seem to be doing well so far. He is a very angry being, but with Raem around at least he'll have a productive outlet.

How symbolic that Sephiroth should take Aeris to Rebena. A question though: exactly how aware was Sephiroth of the outside world during his imprisonment? It'c certainly changed over those last 10 years.

As always, I can't wait to read on! I do hope Aeris can overcome her fears...

Awsome. Simply awsome.

Dear me, you're on a roll! Two chapters in less than a week!

It surprised me a little at first that Khetala would have allowed Aeris to go alone to Mount Kilanda, especially if the Clavat is as important as the legends suggest, but then again Khetala has other responsibilities - most notably guiding her own caravan. She hardly has any time to spare, really.

I'm interested to see how Aeris will fare against the monsters of Kilanda as she's never before wielded a weapon, but I'm sure she'll be resourceful. The previous two chapters were nice and succint, with a little bit of insight into the characters of both Aeris and Khetala, and I enjoyed them. Keep going please, I'm anxious to see how this legend crossover turns out!

An interesting development. Lady Mio believes it would be a good idea to release the fallen angel from imprisonment? I'm with Calliope on this one - after all those years alone I certainly would be feeling a little bit bitter myself. But, I'm sure Lady Mio knows best...

I particularly like the image I have of Ardwynna, because I have never once thought of writing someone with golden armour - I assume it's more for impact than practicality, or maybe something to do with the phoenix that sits on her shoulder? Gold being the colour of a Life magicite and all.

I appreciate your mentioning of me in the comment at the beginning, and I'm flattered that you chose to use Imuardian's name. As for the other connection - I don't see it, but that's no fault of your own as a writer, I'm afraid I'm just very awful at recognising themes and imagery. I'm sure I'll find it eventually! As always, lovely fluid writing.

Ah, that clears things up a little for me. When I read the first chapter I was slgihtly confused because, as you said in your introduction to this chapter, I thought the Masamune had featured in nearly every FF game and felt a bit foolish not knowing exactly which you meant. Now David has explained things for me I feel much better - Final Fantasy VII, correct?

As for this chapter, the crossover works wonderfully. I really like the legend you have created - it just fits so neatly into place in this world. The idea of Lady Mio being not just a 'goddess' but God under who angels serve is an interesting one. A brilliant idea, please keep going! :D

This was well written and descriptive. I like you clearly destinguished the traits of the clans rather than just not mentioning it.