The plot thickens. This is a fascinating tale. I hope you continue soon. Sheridan, Delenn, Marcus, Lorien, maybe a romance between David and Samantha, everything I would wish for in a story is right here.

good chapter, more please

good chapter

So... what really is it like to be 'poked' by John Sheridan?

I do hope he continues his muse-like ministrations! I am hooked...

Wow! That was quite a surprising ending of the first chapter. I didn't expect that. You introduced some intriguing new characters and I'm really curious where you will go with this. Please update soon. I loved the glimpses of David and the romantic in me sees already possibilities ;-).

Well, that's certainly an interesting start! Onwards!

And especially is impatient to know about the miraculously alive John Sheridan..

o... well this has peaked the interest in my little B5 brain.

I don't know where this is coming from or where you may be taking us, but I love the first chapter!

More Please!

judy

Ah! Great cliffhanger! :) Well, I'm hooked despite your warning about updating. I loved Ivanova..."No." A short, simple slam the door in your face. Very appropriate.

I look forward to seeing where this goes. When it goes. :) Oh, and have you thought about toffee with shoes. That could turn out to be very dastardly indeed.