I concur with bob. Neo is a really bad name. cant wait to see the next chapter.

:D

yecch... "Neo"... worst. name. ever.

and is this kind of bizzare code really necessary? "OC-NeoXReiXShinji,ShinjiXAsuka XOC-Neo"

dont like it.

An overall good story, though it could use some more description, like what Neo looks like, I don't think he was described anywhere, or did I just miss it? O.o

Well, anyway, it's not often that I take the time to review a story, so this piece of fiction has something else. I dunno what though, I just had to review. Eh, I'm not making any sense for a change.

Well, keep it up, you've got one reader roped up here. ^^

Pretty good, old friend, pretty good indeed. I don't have the manga, but I have seen a few episodes of the anime. The only person I didn't know was Kaworu.

And of course, this story has an OC... as always. Then again, mine do to, so... yeah...