Great story Tifa, really great

That was a really good story and completely goes with the story! Tho the whole bro/sis thing was a bit strange it was still good!

Wow.. Reminds me of Angel Sanctuary, only Rufus isn't a reincarnation of a girl o_o

Y'know, I was thinking about Sara and Setsuna all the waay thru reading that! It was a well done fic. The horrors of incest are really good pieces of material to work with I find (thats why I used it as part of Ultimecia's insanity in The Raven's Wing) This way v.v.v good

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I'm certainly not going to flame. I think this is a great take on what could have made Rufus the way he was. I also find it wonderful that you are willing to write your ideas freely and ignoring those evil flamers. .

-_-V -CruelShadow says, good job! It sounded really believable almost part of the story! Mine... well you'd have to read it to believe it...

I...I'm speechless. I don't know whether the sister thing with Rufus was good or not...but I must say that your ending was really good. I finally understand why Rufus is so cold-hearted in the game...and how is prophecies came true. What a tragic story for the Shinra family though...

Hey, hon! :D It's strange, but I knew this was inspired by Angel Sanctuary before I even read the footnote. ...I don't see how anyone could flame you over this. Heehee; it's terribly good! There were a couple of grammatical errors but nothing that affected the way the reader reacted. Congratulations!

heh. good warnining.

..people do a lot of things for love..

That was..different. But not bad, lemme assure you! ; You did well showing one of the possible reasons why Rufus became what he was..good job, Tifa! _

The best story I have ever read. It caught the true emotion of Rufus. I loved it...

Awww, that was sad. Even though it's about inter-family lovers, it still reminded me of Romeo & Juliet. Good story! Good for you to write what you want and not care what others think.

Though I'm not a fan of incest,this is still a touching story,showing a different side of Rufus's personality. I give it a A-.

yup, the couple maybe be difficult to swallow, but that doesn't take away from the power of the story. *sniff* sad stuff, man.