"Sitting on the middle sofa was William ‘Spike’ Roberts"

You should've named him William 'Spike' Pratt, making him really the alter ego of William the Bloody.

Buffy refs ftw!

You are doing an splendid job at keeping in-character! I find your story rather intriguing and amusing :) I really hope you continue on with it soon.

hey there, keep it up, im waitng for the next chappie :)

-r4j- xox

i really like this story :) i cant wait until theyre like together, and heartbreak! haha, update soon!

that was great loved it

cute!... update soon =)

Nice chapter
I knew Booth had a seduction plan all along. Lol

I love how you can bring their characters back into the high school environment and keep them so in-character! Loving it! Can't wait until the next chapter! I love watching their budding romance!

What a cool story! I love the Bones/Booth high school stories, or ones when they meet when they were younger. I can't wait to see how the story develops and what happens next.

Excellent!
:-)

great chapter can't wait for more

that was good lvoed it

i love this story!... i understand about the work though, school is a killer for story writers =(... anywho, can't wait for the next chap when you get the chance! =)

Hm...I only forgive you for putting it on hiatus because you have a good reason and I luv this fic so far. Hope your essays go well and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!

its a great story. I love how you made booth give her the "Bones" thing, its cute.

I like it, it's cute and stuff-but...stop the whole Buffy/Spike/Sunnydale thing. Either you do a x-over or you make up some own names- how about- Eliza and Nick? Or Sara and Logan? Or Kate and Simon? Or Lily and Brian?? Kay? You with me?

Also what's up with Summer? Why is she so much younger than Booth? Is that an important part of the story/plot line? Or else you could just make her 12 or something (a lot more believe with a 4-5 year gap then a 10 year one...just saying.) or keep her that young and put Booths brother (Jaden or whatever his name was :S)in the middle (a five year gap between them both or something?? Booth 15-16, Jaden 11, and Summers 6)

Also with Booth’s drunken dad, does he work? How do they get money otherwise? Can you be drunk all the time and not get fired? Booth’s dad had a hair salon right? And does he always beat Booth up when he’s drunk? If that is so- would Booth not be use to making up excuses and hiding it? Also where is mommy dearest??

I’m also wondering why you are choosing not go to go with the quite interesting plot line with Brennan’s parents going missing? I guess it’s up to you- but actually you wouldn’t have to say much at all about it- this takes place a year and a half (this being Brennan’s freshman year- most people being 14- her parents disappearing Christmas when she’s fifteen probably her sophomore year?!!)Before they go missing so they would also “just” be a science teacher and a book keeper if you get my drift :P they would just be ordinary people- but keep in mind some old bank-robbing friends coming to visit make for a very interesting plot line…I’m just saying :P

Also are they all freshmen? Because from what I understand about high school (considering we don’t have it here I would not have to feel very bad if I was wrong :P) is that you can take classes with people who are both older and younger than you… Am I right?

Because from what I understand you have to take a minimum of classes in some subjects (like PE, English and math probably some other stuff) and if you don’t take all of them your freshman year you will have to take them with the younger students?! Well that’s what I thought anyways…sorry for writing a novel :D but the story is good and I wouldn’t have given you all this feedback if I didn’t think you could make this story great :D