I love this anime though I didnt like the ending. This story gives an alternate ending but still, the characters seem so OOC. Limelda being so nice and considerate when she never showed any almost throughout the anime, other than when she was with Carrosa. And Madlax being such a good companion when she was more of a loner in the anime. Same with Vanessa, but still a good reading. Thanks for the hard work!

I love all of your Madlax fics but in my opinion..
I found this one to be the best.
It was completely wonderful!
Please, continue writing more in the future.

~Razer

Excellent! I just love it! Firs time in my life I read an alternative ending of Madlax with Vanessa alive and it has sense. Thank God, Limelda and Madlax wind up together, because the pairing with Vanessa make no sense IMHO. Keep writing more fics about this anime, you have a fan here ;)

Now.. This should be the REAL ending of Madlax. I was so sad that Vanessa died.. It made me depressed. I was hoping for a Madlax x Vanessa pairing at the end but I guess not. But, I really liked this story =] Good job xD I hope you'll continue writing more Madlax fanfics.

O/O Thank you for your comment in yout A/N. I really enjoyed being your beta in this fic as I always enjoy it. And you are right when you say that we are creatives half because our ideas complete to each other.

Talking about this story, I like the way you treat a "what if" without falling in common places and out of cannon ideas.

ah..i thought that Vanessa and Madlax would hook up...guess not