Wow. Amazing story. Kinda made tear up somewhere in the end Dx Good job w this story. It was great!

One of the best written Kataang fics I've read so far. And nice move naming thier kid "Kya".

Thank you! One of the few kataang with kid I enjoyed.

Wow.
Just...
Wow.

I loved it! I was about to cry in SEVERAL places! I honor thee, author of this story! Thank you for bringing this to us. I lOVED IT!

you are definetly a very good writer, keep up the stories

That was a beautiful piece of fanfiction. I can only hope that there will be a sequel.

The only thing that I had a difficult time grasping was how Kya didn't make a connection between Appa and the Avatar/her dad. I mean, did the storytellers just leave out that part, or something? I suppose that's plausible, but... Yeah. Whatever explanation you have would be great.

hey great story!! I loved it..especially kataang family fics ..I think you should have more reviews for this ..it's a full oneshot that's like a story...sorry if that doesn't make sense. Anyways i think it the genre was under romance you'd get way more reviews! keep it up

This was a beautiful story. When Aang died, I couldn't stop crying, and I wanted to stop reading, cause whats a story without Aang? But I didn't and I'm so happy and you are afntastic writer and I'm so saving this and I think I'll shut up now but yes, thatnk you so much! :,D

I loved this story! I've been waiting for someone to write a Kataang-parent story, and a good one at that. Cant wait to read more from you! :D

hmm...you were a little too focused on hiding the fact that Aang is the avatar. Everyone in the village should have known that, and possibly have known him well enough just to call him Aang anyway. Plus, when you stated that Zuko knew about Kya, but then repeated that he knew not to call Aang the avatar in front of her it seemed a little redundant.

Your explanation for Toph having shoes made out of earth so she can still see is a bit farfetched. Maybe she could see a little, but not to the same extent of knowing exactly where each person is, etc.

And Kya could have easily stayed with Uncle Sokka and not raised any suspisions, since Chan didn't know Aang had a daughter.

Over all though, I did appreciate the story, and I thought your ending was fairly good. In particular I like the involvement of the Lionturtle. :)

that was BEAUTIFUL! just amazing... even though that is an under statement. YOu are a AMAZING writer, and the charecters are so real! you made Kya so realistic, just like ANY little kid, so full of questions.

i am so favoriting this!

I can not think of a single word to describe how freaking awesome this story was! Any word would be a huge understatment. It was so well written and the character's were perfect! The ending was so epic; i couldn't stop reading, even for a second! Nothing short of a perfect ending!

-squee- Pretty! You need a review for something of this size. xD It was so wonderful and angsty and actiony and all that wonderful stuffs. :3 Wittle Kya is so cute!