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Reviews for: Loss of a Hero
LadyMo
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
Love the missing scene. I can see it happenning. I always wondered who informed Jack that Janet was dead. When he came back into the picture Carter was knocking on the door and he was being released. You could see in his face that he knew and that he was hurting but did not know how he knew. This scene works.
:-)
not a zatarc
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
That was very sweet, and sad at the same time. It was so true to character. Nicely done. :)
Bixata
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
That was beautiful and heartfelt, I can imagine that is exactly how Jack would have felt and what he would have done to comfort the nurse. Thanks for sharing.
Curuchamion
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
Sweet. I've read "Heroes" tags before, all good--seems there's something about a tribute that brings out the best in a writer--but this is the first Jack POV tag I remember seeing. And it's perfect. Thank you.
PapayaK
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
very nice.
E. Nagrom
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
that was very well done. I'm sure Janet would be very proud of this :)

E.
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