 LadyMo 2008-07-30 . chapter 1Love the missing scene. I can see it happenning. I always wondered who informed Jack that Janet was dead. When he came back into the picture Carter was knocking on the door and he was being released. You could see in his face that he knew and that he was hurting but did not know how he knew. This scene works.
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 not a zatarc 2008-07-30 . chapter 1That was very sweet, and sad at the same time. It was so true to character. Nicely done. :) |
 Bixata 2008-07-29 . chapter 1That was beautiful and heartfelt, I can imagine that is exactly how Jack would have felt and what he would have done to comfort the nurse. Thanks for sharing. |
 Curuchamion 2008-07-29 . chapter 1Sweet. I've read "Heroes" tags before, all good--seems there's something about a tribute that brings out the best in a writer--but this is the first Jack POV tag I remember seeing. And it's perfect. Thank you. |
 PapayaK 2008-07-29 . chapter 1very nice. |
 E. Nagrom 2008-07-29 . chapter 1that was very well done. I'm sure Janet would be very proud of this :)
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