wow. i don't quite get how everything fits together. please make the connections more clear in your next fanfiction. other than that, it was really good. i almost cried reading this story. i'm not just saying that for your benifit.

Wow. That was really really powerful.
"you needed wanted more"
But that either needs some sort of separation or a word removed, I think.
"nicest-guy-on-earth-wish-he-was-my-father-turned-traitorous-scheming-manipulative-dirtbag"
Jeb. I cried.
This was a beautiful piece, and I loved how Nudge found a place to belong in her religion. I'd never even thought of that before, but you did it beautifully. Great job.

Nice...I don't get the title, but I liked the overall content in this fic. But ain't Erasers now Flyboys?