shit, no way. Joss is pregnant? crap, i cant believe i put off reading this when the updates came in.

im soo happy for Wade and Joss right now. they finally get back together.

That last statement sounds like Joss is pregnant for real that time. Since I'm sure most people wouldn't think about that unless it's an issue that will be coming up soon, rather than the possibility of it coming up. But I was amused at how Joss handled that. Especially when she pretty much shocked everyone with how she was able to figure things out with the schematics. And with how she got her own office right away as well, even though the twins were still trying to get their own offices. Though, not much happened overall, it was still quite amusing and entertaining as well. And thanks for posting all of this. I kinda wonder as well if you'll develop more of what happened with Zita and Jim as well as where that relationship is going.

Nice wrap-up to an excellent story.

Joss is expecting a baby or she is already pregnant? Well heck of a thing to end a story. And one of the twins already has a sorta steady GF with Zita. Zita would do well tor remember that she will bring the madness of her workplace to her home if she goes for a complete relationship.

did expect more of a bigger deal on the Joss getting a job. Then again she already proven herself in the past as a scientist.

Read you later!

Well, with a closing line like that, I'm guessing Wade won't be getting any sleep tonight.

Nice little vignette, with some of that trademark KiY dialogue and all the warm fuzzies we've come to expect. Can't help but feel a little cheated that we didn't get to attend Wade and Joss' actual ceremony after all the other weddings we've been to. I think you've written more weddings than anyone else in the KP fandom.

Alex.

KiY, those little teasers you give me in review replies are going to kill me! You gave me just enough to whet the appetite, and then you serve a main course like this!

Leave it to a Possible-Load to not only find the problem, but to take it on herself to find the solution and figure out how to make it happen. No where did Zita say that working out the cost and profit margins were part of the test. She was auditioning for the role of an engineer. Cost isn't really their department. (Just ask our resident engineers in chat!)

Just out of curiosity, about when did Zita go from popular video game player to penny pinching, highly conservative woman-in-charge-of-everything? I think she really needs somebody like Jim Possible, just to balance out her life. He has that quality of spontinaity that Ron brought to a relationship.

Floored by a last line again.

Lipsky and Load is always such an interesting place, and only sometimes in the Chinese sense.

And you've got another couple going. When you keep thinking like that, it probably isn't just what physical.

That was amusing. Joss certainly did well with the wizard's first rule; which is something I recently read in a light reading book. Anyway, this whole part really seemed to go a lot faster than your usual pace has things go. I'm guessing that it's more that it was already taking a lot and you're probably tired or it just not being finished. But it's certainly quite good as it is anyway. Though, I also enjoyed Wade's reaction to hearing what Joss told her father. It certainly was amusing to see him in such a state of panic. As well as how Wade's paranoia was going off the charts, with good reason too. Anyway, I'm quite eager to see what you put out next on it, since this really feels like it could easily be the end of it, which has had me checking to make sure that it wasn't.

Very interesting to see so many events packed into one chapter. From having two weddings, a acceptance scene with Bego and Slim, you could easily done 2 or 3 chapters from all those events. It made for a very meaty chapter.

Ohh Slim you have done a few things to redeem yourself but that doesn't mean everybody is going to get along with you instantly. Should have not ask for that dance. Heh.

Read you later!

Excellent chapter. Nice background development, And consistent characterizations. Terrible at expressing myself sometimes, I just like it a lot.

OK, that was underhanded and sneaky and mean and all kinds of other things. But I really had fun reading about it and I'm wondering if there'll be another round and , if so, who Joss will take on next.

I'm worried that with Joss as his partner, Wade might have trouble keeping away from the dark side. Think of all the world-dominating possibilities of Wade's genius and Joss' unscrupulous approach to getting her way.

Alex

The battle is engaged. Joss brings out the big guns and scores a major victory. Not sure what she'll be able to do for round, two, somehow, I don't think she'll be able to use the same weapons in the next battle.

Alex

Well, once more into the breech of family intrigue. I really like the way your characters have real backgrounds, real emotions and real problems. The life you bring to the secondary characters in the series highlights your talent and makes me want to read a story about some of your own characters. This little arc was filled with all the bittersweet love/hate that is family and somehow, you manage to make the bitter go down easy.

I really enjoyed this.
Alex

I like the fact that you didn't throw them back together with the snap of a finger. I think your pacing for this relationship is pretty good. Wade seems to have matured a lot since the "incident." and I hope he's just waiting for Joss to catch up instead of being paranoid and withdrawn.

The pacing of the writing was also quite good.

Alex