This is quite interesting (: Keep up your story writing! hehe :D

awww

i love it and my heart gose out for piper in this

awsome cool great any word that means good is included

gah! your songfics are so awesome, especially compared to mine...

stop being so good!

jk (seriously though, they rock)

lol true they do name quite a few after birds, update soon yay

Aww; but what was it like for Aerrow I want to know!

This was really good.

aw, very sweet!

wish it had been longer, but it wz a nic lengthm short nd sweet!

!A4E!

Very nice, you did a good job here. As for the bird thing, that olny applies to girls

Piper, Starling, Lark, Dove, so on. Wren was the only guy I know of that this happened to.

I think it might be why Master Cyclonis goes by her title, her real name is probably embaresing, something like Finch or Pigon lol. I look foward to seeing your next work. Til then Ja Ne!

nice whisper real nice and this was in Robins POV rite.

Poor Piper...

This is too short! No!

Please update!

Aie! Love triangle!

P.S. I don't like the pairing...

Make a fanfic about...uh...well, something!

Piper: OMG Poor Piper. I hope Aerrow says that he loves her not Robin

Kairi: Ya I mean I hate when boys play with a girls feelings. Its just not right

*Piper and Kairi*

wow what does Aerrow say? will it be the start of some new re;lationship or will it just be the heart breaker to pipers happiness? *sobs* update soon plz plz plz

Aw...poor Piper.

Why must we crush her heart?

Please updatE!

Of course you know you're the author of this!

I want to know though! Please update soon! .