wow, just wow! read this all in one go it is amazing! is there more to come? please don't tell you're leaving it at that!

Well I certainly didn't see that coming, but I can't wait to see what he has in mind

omg, this story is so heart wrenching. i just want to yell at owen that he's the one who would make abbey happy and that jack and ianto belong together. more please :)

oh, this is great, you can't help thinking Jack deserves everything he gets

Oh no, you did not just use the acronym Janto did you? and it was all going so well

Woot :) love the story still, sorry it took me a while to catch back up, school has been hectic, never the less, I still love this fic... Its so sad, poor Jack, as a reader want people to be nice to him but then at the same time you realize that he has to learn :) well great job, and update ^^
-Ellipsis

Aw, they made up, Miranda is getting more and more mysterious by the day, carry on with the good work

I'm glad Ianto forced Jack to really talk. I think Jack needed it, and Ianto sure needed to hear it. I just hope that getting it all out in the open will help their relationship move forward. Hurry and update please.
Judy

Overall, the bits with Owen are working the best. I get that there's conflict with Jack and Abbey, but that I feel like I'm being bludgeoned with it. I also don't get how Jack can be ** off because her dad is abusing her, yet be abusive of her. Andy, Owen and Ianto's inaction is starting to feel fake. Nothing's moving. Dead calm. ?

So this if the first time I'm speaking up as co-author. mysterypowet66 I don't know if Elizabeth Bartlett replied to you or not, but I thought I would for two reasons... a) you recognized that the titles are generally (with the exception of "Free Falling" "Erase") classic rock songs... and 2) because you actually knew "Fight Fire With Fire" was from Kansas. I don't know of a lot of people who actually know that song... you are officially my hero. :D And I am so glad that you are enjoying the story so far... I spent a lot of time working on how Andy (especially since there's less of him in the story) would react to what happened to Abbey. And yes... Jack is being a but of an ** to everyone... which we are doing that on purpose... that is our plan in the way we're writing. :D You made my day by recognizing the Kansas song... anyway, thanks to everyone who's reviewing and reading this... I'm so glad you guys all like it.

I really love the parallel views of Owen and Andy in this. Still feel like Jack's being an uber-git, but the expo helps. Also- I just noticed that the Chapter titles are all 70's/80's arena rock. Fight Fire with Fire- Kansas?

Love the story so far, am hooked!

Really well done. You've begun stitching things together.

This is great, really great

Aw its sad :( I want everyone to be all happy, however very good job in making it cannon-ish as everything wouldn't be happy instantly, Jack is way to stubborn for everything to go fine :P. Well awesomeness, sorry for not reviewing quicker the internet was out at my new school for the first few weeks. Well keep updating :) your doing an awesome job speed wise considering the quality ^^
-Ellipsis aka ...