Not out of character at all, I don't think.

I hate it when Akira treats Shirogane as he does, and hides his true feelings, but we see the delightfully uncomfortable, sexy, sly or sad disappointed responses from the Shadow.

Poor Shirogane... out in the yard! I hope Akira relents.

THE REVIEWING FOOL

It's another cute story of yours! You're really so very talented! If i tried anything like this, i KNOW i'd fail miserably. Good work! :D
By the way, i don't think your characters are out of character. They seem just like the ones i watch in the anime, you know? :|

Hahaha! Too cute! Very beautifully written with the characters in character =)

Jaja
Akira never would admit thw way that he feels about shirogane
^o^

Nice fanfic

see ya soon!!

PS: this is so short ToT would you make another one... please...

PS-2: I'm not an english reader so, excuse me if this review isn't good . u.u Gomenne

yay. monochrome finally has a following on . it took for-ever. akira amuses me - always pushing shirogane away. very cute with the way shirogane just kept inching in until he got what he wanted.

I like your story! I really think that it is good! Not bad at protraying Akira and Shirogane. ^_^

It's great!
And don worry...at least Shirogane's in character...& it would be best if Akira reacted this way to Shirogane too~~ x)

First, there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but nothing I couldn't ignore.^^

Second, I really like the story. *heh* It made me laugh and blush at the same time.^^ Who would ever thought that Akira could moan in a stiuation like that.*heh*

~Book Thief101♥

“No, you are sleeping in the yard tonight!”

Favorite part. XD Other than the awesome boy smexiness and cuddingly-ness...
Very good fanfiction. Loved it. ^_^

hahaa, I love this. I adore this. Its amazing. I just ** adore monochrome factor. Its amazing. its fantastic.
Please do continiue writing more fictions like this. They are just perfect!

Aw poor Shirogane. XD lol Love it. ^^

Wow! Cute! ^^ Awesome work!

yeah... more!! more! more!
this one is cute...
but please make Akira the Seme and Shirogane as the Uke...
please... just a request...
please please...
hehehe...
this one is very very great...
ope u can make more... hehe
mwuah...

AHAHAHA
IN THE YARD
LIKE THE DOG YOU ARE, SHIROGANE
So silly, so silly. See, I've only read the first two books of the manga, so I don't usually know what people are talking about when it concerns the anime [considering the anime is so much more BL.]. But this was a famous enough incident for me to know. And I just want to say, ha. Yes. Shirogane, your personal heater.
Yay! Third MF fanfic! Love ya!

Wow. It's been so long since I last wrote a review... Anyway. I loved this story!! It was so cute. I just recently got into Monochrome Factor and was wondering why no one had written any stories about it. Like two weeks later or so I found this and I'm so glad I read it. The lack of mistakes made it a read too. I hope you'll put up another one sometime. Ja ne!