Let me start out by apologizing for my LAZINESS. I have been seriously craving Shep Whump for some unknown reason and rather than review each story read, I jumped right into the next one. If observed, one would probably think I was addicted or something silly like that...*clearing throat*

Anyway, I like your stories because you have successfully captured the personalities of our favorite characters, AND you learn toward whumpage. I like that. Lord help me if someone would ever do a study on why we like whumpage but so what. Of all things to be addicted to, I consider this to be the least harmful. In fact, it's ALMOST as good as chocolate. *let's see...whumpage, chocolate...*

Great stuff, Obsessed1. This was a wonderful read and revealed the strength of Teyla's and John's connection with each other.

yes! thank you for this tag. I hate it when they make them look so hurt and then all of a sudden is like nothing happened.
great job

I was kinda exasperated at the episode because of John's participation in the rescue mision after having being impaled. Not just impaled, but having had the object forcibly and inexpertly removed before medical attention was even available.

It was just too simple. I'm glad you filled in the gaps, and gave some more weight to John's injury.

I also enjoyed your characterizations. Thank you for sharing.

Terrific missing scene/tag!! Very believable!!

Thanks for this. It was a great tag. My favorite part: He prodded his side, “Surgery wasn’t as bad as I thought.”

“You have not had it yet.”

“Really?” he looked disappointed, “Oh.”

That was so funny. I could just see Joe and Rachel pulling that off.

*claps* great tag to an awesome episode! Loved the Shep whump and Teyla’s concern. :)

That put just the right finishing touch to that episode. THANK YOU! I really love your stuff. God bless you.

Loved it!! I was missing this!

Yes, this was definitely missing from the actual ep. Great addition.

This is great! Why couldn't this have been included in the episode? But since it wasn't, thank you so much for writing it. And writing it well, with good characterization, and just the right amount of emotion all around.

I really enjoyed this story. Thanks for sharing it! :D

Great tag- loved it ! It must be said: "It didn't bare thinking about..." Bare is naked, you meant bear- yes, animal but also to be held up or tolerated.

Very nice! Excellent idea for a tag.

Excellent tag and completely believable! Loved the precision of seeing it from both points of view!