Nice, cant wait to see how this story turns out!

Oh i like this one! Please write more..at least a few more chapters!

I love this. I love Vincent's "I can't believe I'm sitting here listening to these girls talk about some guy" attitude. Great Job. CloudxZack 4 EVAR! Please update soon!

Looks interesting ^_^

i love this! cloud is soo cute and i love how you write the characters and thier realistic interaction with eachother!
the school has to notice clouds god-like looks too, right?!
tifa has a fowl mouth! update soon!

It's a good story. Update please! Oh, and, I JUST LOVE CLOUD/ZACK pairing! \>o

This is the funniest thing I have ever read. Please continue.
LOL
Aerith: So what, he says fi to me when he sees me in the hall ways.

Vincent: He says hi to every person that smiles at him...

Aerith: So what? Stop destroying my fantasy!

LOLOLOLOL That sounds so right in my mind. I mean Vincent would say that, Aerith would get mad, and Zack is so clueless sometimes. But, that is why we love him.

PS. Rufus is a brat. -Giggles-

I'm actually more surprised abput Vincent being a teen... I mean he is 55 in the game, well I liked the start of this but the first chapter is kind of short, but good nonetheless