 jimmy-barnes-13 2009-07-15 . chapter 1Really interesting, I enjoyed it a lot :) |
 Barranca 2009-04-17 . chapter 1Sweet, though it has got its share of Harry-angst. Wouldn't be Harry without it :) |
 same.lame.name. 2009-01-31 . chapter 1Interesting. I usually don't like HP/LV but this was really good. |
 Escrimer 2008-12-13 . chapter 1Oh, spooky. Me likey. Harry/Voldy with a nice dark twist. Very well done. |
 Sabaku no Sable 2008-11-22 . chapter 1poor harry. let the ones you love die, be with your true love? or kill your true love for those you love? i just depressed myself. |
 MYsweetAngel 2008-09-22 . chapter 1wow this
one-shot was awsome!
i loved it!!
wow!! |
 BloodiedFangs 2008-09-01 . chapter 1harry was tricked?? i think thats what the last line was saying. very good story by the way :) well written and a good and original plot, it always makes a great story ;) |
 devils-pet-1 2008-08-04 . chapter 1Woah, I love it. It's great. |
 Mireya Humbolt 2008-07-30 . chapter 1Esa fue genial, me encanto la forma en que se encontraron y se llevo voldi a harry.
Muchas felicidades
Mireya Humbolt
"Amar es entregarlo todo, sin resveras, ni condiciones aunque al final solo quede llorar de dolor" |
 WynterRavenheart 2008-07-30 . chapter 1So in this one we DID get a kiss!
You should write a bit more... maybe a chaptered story? I find myself loving your one-shots |
 Alma Riddle 2008-07-30 . chapter 1Hey! I like it. It was diffrent some way./Alma |
 Jynx101 2008-07-29 . chapter 1:) You should write a sequel! |
 Jetede 2008-07-29 . chapter 1I don't think you should've put the last "I win" sentence at the end of this story. The sentence "Because you're mine" is enough to hint on the fact that Voldemort won the argument, and thus also won Harry in the end.
You've got such a great one-shot; great story plot and flow, full of emotions up to that line, and then BAM! suddenly there's this awkward "I win." at the end... the strong emotions between Harry's denial of Voldemort's insinuations and his questions dropped all of a sudden there. Imagine your story is like climbing up a cliff, with the top of the cliff being the climax of the story, and then suddenly the cliff stops abruptly and us the readers, the ones who are climbing up the cliff fell off of it right after we reach that top. That's what I felt like when I read that last line. |
 KuroxTenshi 2008-07-29 . chapter 1Hot
Poor Harry, though... |