Breathtakingly beautiful. You have an amazing way with words. :)

wow this whole entire story has held my heart! i enjoyed every moment of reading this fanfic.each and every scene is clear in my mind. you explained every detail with such passion and intensity. im glad that i read it!

i do hope that you will continue writing the way you do. this wonderful story will remain clear in my memory. i wish i could write as well as you can.

:]pandawriter95

holy! moly! dang this chapter was so intense! i wanted to scream and laugh but with my siblings around it would be far too embarrassing.

AHEMM!

now that im back to sanity! i really do enjoy your writing. you have explained every single detail soo well. having played final fantasy 4 before, i never thought that the battle would be so deep and discriptive. this is a very good thing!

well now to continue on with your wonderful and enjoyable story!

:]pandawriter95

Beautiful. T.T

I did catch a few typos and mistakes here and there, but it wasn't anything major ^^

Overall amazingly poetic and beautiful writing~
You've really brought the characters to life through your awesome descriptions~

u, lucky one, have writin the only story on a fan fiction that i red daily all the way to the end! it was really REALLY good! KYA! loved it!

Very cute. I love the ending. :)

*applause!*

This chapter was by far your most beautiful and most poetic. Reading this was like reading music, and I couldn't help but be swept off my feet :)

This is a gem :)

"You’re like nobody else, a butterfly queen in a court of fleas, a star aglow above a sea of cinders."

Also, this line is absolutely stunning. Excellent word choice!

There doesn't need to be a sequel to this, as I feel you've concluded it nicely, but I hope you'll write more in general! (and as much as I'd like to see what happens next, I think it's best to leave it to the imagination, lol)

I'm sad it's over, but you did a great job! Hope to see more work from you in the future!
~myth :)

Ah, this was excellent. I definitely felt like I was /there/. I thought your Cid and Edge were well done and I greatly enjoyed Cid's little drops of old, blunt wisdom.

I see a balcony scene in our future ;)

And I can only imagine how awesome it will be!

This is quite cute. Nice work.

I'll have you know that while reading this I was gripping my desk for dear life. I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH.

AH! The descriptions...Edge /prancing/! The image made me laugh out loud!

The exchange of glances between the two of them! UGH! Love it :)

I'm so happy :)

love ur story for FFIV. im always looking for good fanfics that actually stay to the plot, and urs did :) keep writing and ill keep reading!

Woohoo!! YAY! My new ultra fav story. >w< I love it still...

teehee, drunken Edge was just perfect. ^^ So funny. Keep up the good work!

*SPAZZES*

Ahh, Edge intoxicated was awesome indeed :)

I think what I love best about your exchanges of dialogue is the way you have them communicate with expressions and simple looks. It adds another dimension to their presence as characters :)

Plus, I'm a major angst fan, so this is seriously making me jump up and down in my seat with anticipation. I'm really not joking. haha :)

God dammit! Cliffhangers, ugh!

Great story! Huzzah! I love it, can't wait for the rest. ^^