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Glacarius
2009-09-30 . chapter 7
please update soon awesome story
CheeseMonkeys
2009-09-29 . chapter 7
Dude your story is so amazing! I'm loving it! I can't wait to see what happens when everyone meets up with Dante again. Oh and I adore the idea you came up with for Nero's past. Pretty creative. I so want Vergil to tell Nero the past. Though if I remember right in actual cannon, isn't Vergil Nero's Dad!? I am not positive though. Poor Dante I guess the kid isn't his. So then whose is it? Are you ever going to update the story again!? Please continue it! It's so good!
Clairavance
2009-09-08 . chapter 7
I am in serious awe of Vergil's theory about Nero.
Poor Dante. How could Hailey cheat on him? The litte slut! Hope Lady kicks her ass - once the baby's out and all, I mean.
Very, very good :)
Clairavance
2009-09-08 . chapter 5
...that was so COOL! :)
Score for Dante! lol.

There are a few places where the tenses jump back and forth from present to past, where it just doesn't fit right. But other than that, it's pretty darn good, and it's getting so exciting now.
Clairavance
2009-09-08 . chapter 4
Tony Redgrave? Where have I heard that name before? Is that the blips of resident evil that got carried into DMC?

And why does everyone know about this mysterious woman who gave Ebony and Ivory to Dante, except for me? It's crazy. I'm a DMC junkie - I got the game, I got the manga, I got the anime, hell I've even got the graphic novel for DMC2. They mentioned her in like, one line, and don't go into it.Why? It's driving me bonkers trying to fit all the puzzle pieces together.

Anyway. It was a good chapter :)
Clairavance
2009-09-08 . chapter 3
His funeral as a party at Love Planet? Ha ha ha!
And lol at Mike poking Dante, that was hilarious. Darn though - I was waiting for one of the kids to mention Dante smelling like poo.
He he he, Dante trying to make a break for it from hospital. I'd brainwash him if he had memory loss. Seriously, I would. To hell with Lady and Trish, lol.
Clairavance
2009-09-08 . chapter 2
lol, Mr Diarrhea. I was waiting for a quirky remark from him :)

I thought the poo monster was cool. Can I have some candy now? ;)
Karaii
2009-06-18 . chapter 7
N I'm LOVING this - you have no idea just how much I'm enjoying it :D I seriously read this chapter as slow as I could because I didn't want it to end XD I love how you write each character - and every intrigue you open up with every chapter has kept me hooked and wanting more ;; I know you haven't updated in a while, but I just wanted to let you know that I'm watching this fic and can't wait for another update <3 Keep it up!
Lenighma
2009-06-13 . chapter 7
Holy shi-?! YES!
*Clamps a hand over mouth*...
I mean...nice! 8'D Pleaseohpleaseohpleaseohplease continue as soon as you can! You write this so WELL! And...I never liked Hailey from the beginning. Honestly. Truly. Deep in my little grayish black heart. *Shakes head* Nu-uh. And about Nero...mm hm. That hurts. That STINGS.
Continue as son as you can!
Devilsbliss
2009-05-26 . chapter 7
Whoa...you're such a cruel author with your ingenius plot twists. Lmao... this is so shocking and wicked that it has to be funny.

Continue...Continue...Continue...!
PillowMagic
2009-03-29 . chapter 4
I love it, love it, love it. Dante being called Tony though...I can't handle it XD.

I love your descriptions. The scene where he rips the IV out had be squirming in my seat.

Also MRI's are HELL. It IS a white coffin. I feel sorry for him already.
Victorules
2009-03-28 . chapter 7
This story is amazing! The love between Lady and Dante and the way he gives her the ring right before he leaves, and then stays behind to keep the demons away from her and then forgets everything, though it is kind of sad for Lady that he doesnt at least dream about her or somehow remembers her, but still I cant wait for the next chapter. It has to be one of the best ive ever read, and I DO read ALOT of fan fics.I would go as far as to beg you to update the next chapter ASAP, and PLEASE hurry, Im having trouble sleeping with the burning curiosity of what will happen next!

P.S.: Holy shit that was the longest review Ive ever written, Im usially the silent guy lounging lazily at the back of the classroom. Or should I say WAS?, now I just use that time to compensate from my lack of sleep. And... oh! Im doing it again! Ill just stfu and let you do your work.
PillowMagic
2009-03-26 . chapter 2
Loved it! This is a really interesting story. The ... poo demon had me rolling. This is really well written. You said to point out if we see any mistakes, but I see very few. Really, an awesome story.

I love Vergil's sense of human. “So, Dante, did you get her knocked up?”

You have a new fan :)
Anonymous
2009-03-14 . chapter 7
This is amazing! I've read amnesia fics for many things before, but this is the best written one I've ever seen. The story is engaging
and believable, not cheesy in the slightest! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Update soon!
Tora-Katana
2009-03-13 . chapter 7
Lovely and imaginative story. I really enjoy your writing!
I thought it was also the best explanation I have seen so far of how Nero happened to have Sparda blood and could use Yamato. I am glad you used the best way to get Dante out of his responsibility. Can't wait for the next chapter...
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