Really beautiful story... it totally melted my heart. I just love your work... I am a Sparrabeth fanatic and you are my all time favorite Sparrabeth author (and one of the best fanfic writers in general!).

Whenever I am having a less than fantastic day... a trip to your page has my spirits up in no time! You are an extraordinarly gifted writer... when I read your stories, its not like I'm just reading them. It's as if I'm living them, watching the events unfold before my very eyes, as if your characters are dear old friends of mine.

I just wanted to thank you for doing what you do, and I would not at all be suprised (I'm expecting it, actaully) if you have a book (or several) out one day. Never stop writing dearest!

Leah

This is so sweet! Totally melted my heart.

I adore this song, too. Though the original is best, I think!

Aww that was so sweet.

Jack was adorably sweet in this too :)

xxoxx

Really, really lovely! Thank you!

Aww! That was so cute. Jack was so sweet!.

That was so sad and beautiful loves

Ah, such fluff! I just melted and you're to blame! Lol. This was so sweet, and it even had a modern, contemporary feel to it somehow. I guess that's just evidence that sparrabeth is a relationship that transcends time.

aw. jack is so sweet. i love him so much and he really is a good man.

Oh wow. This was... this was honestly beautiful.

I really, really loved it. :)

Amazing job! I love the soft side of Jack. It really shows just how much he loves her, how much he wants to make things right...

And dancing, how romantic!

Lovely! I really enjoyed reading this!

Aw! That is so incredibly sweet!

That was truely beautiful! I love it when Jack is so caring with Lizzie and you described it so wonderfully, I really could feel it that he was sorry!

Excellent work! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

Hoist the colours high,

Sassy

Very cute! Very much in character.

omg that was so sweet! i love jack - he's just so awesome-ly adorable

A seriously romantic Jack! I love it!

This is really ironic... I have a story I've been working on for a couple months, that is quite like this, actually. o3o Save for the fact that it is different, but still very much similar. xD Wierd.

Anyway, this was so cute. I adored the beginning paragraphs, they brought a chuckle or two to my morning. My favorite line;

'Her irritation caused him to become irritated and once a single, innocent insult had been thrown, the Pearl’s crew hit the deck, knowing full well that a war had been waged.'

I can almost see a cartoon of that - Jack and Elizabeth having an all out war and the crew literally throwing themselves to the deck. So cute. xD

I loved this fic and the idea. Quite lovel.y :3

Liz