K u.n.d.e.r.s.t.a.n.d.

YOU'RE AMAZING.

Btw the last three lines of chapter one was BRILLIANT.

I

LOVE

THEM

ALL!

All are very beautiful and unique,

And call me dark,

I REALLY loved the suicide one!

Oh, and the VERY last line,

on the VERY last poem :)

Its really good at least from my piont of view.

Wow, very subtle, but gave the effect of poem very well. I liked this little piece!_

who are these about? i am sensing robin/star on the first one? am i correct or not even close?

I'll tell you what I thought..I think it was awesome! You're a great poet! A little more practice and you could start publishing those stuff. Seriously!

Write more! Hahah!

may GOD bless you..

You asked for it. My first thought was; "Subject: LUV. How original." I can't help it. It's got something to do with the incredible amount of Romance compared to other genres, especially in the TT section.

Other than that... no, let me just read again... gotta be somewhat fair here...

Hey, rhymes! Well, a few half-rhymes, but still, at least there's rhymes. More than what you can say of my own one attempt at this stuff.

I don't claim to have read much poetry, but my idea of it is something like "love for language". Isn't that actually what the word means? Anyway, I don't see much of that here. I see a honest attempt to convey your feelings into words, (reads again) and you succeed. I think I might have even felt a bit of a sting in the corner of my left eye, just now.

My greatest criticism is the rather flimsy relevance to the TT section. I can see the whole Rae-Rob-Star triangle thing, but it could still fit into most any other section on FFnet.

i love this

the poetry is cool and different.

Hey. They weren't bad. You like writing love poems, eh? Sad love poems.

'shakes head' Why am I not surprised about the sad part? M'dear, are you the kind of person who squeals at unhappy endings in movies and books?

..I'm teasing, just so you know.

-Eve