I must say I do wish you would write more on this. It is very good and very well written.

I would like to read more and hope that you will continue to write this story more and soon.

I like the story and I hope to see the next part up soon. Keep up the good work.

This sounds like its going to be a great story! I can't wait for you to update more! Although you haven't updated in like, two months. :P

I can't wait for more this looks REALLY good!

this is really good plz dont stop and plz update soon

Zatara Freak Out!

Ah! I want to know what happens next! xD I hope you update again soon.

Hi there, welcome back. This was a very interesting chapter. It's nice to hear what Katara and Zuko were up to during their nine years in Bai Sing Sei. I can't wait to see what happens next. I do hope you update "Eternal Freedom" soon; I know I gave you an idea for a new chapter a long time ago, if you remember what it was, I hope it will help you out. Anyway keep up the good work and see you soon! I also hope I didn't bug you about "Eternal Freedom"; if I did, sorry about that.

This looks promising! I've seen your other Avatar pieces and I can't wait for this one.

Hey ok i think this story is going to be like totally awesome i cant wait for more chaps and i just love it so far and there is only one chap usually i have to read more than one chap to like the story but this is like a totally different situation one of the best stories i have read yet i hope you continue and update soon because i cant wait 4 more good job i love it b proud totally 10 out of 10

its ok but you might want to be a little more discripitve...please read my vampire night story and give me your feed back...thanks!

oo I know this story is going to be really good.

groovy story.
update soon?
PEACE!

awesome new fic!! i really like
what you've done for the plot
so far, and amazing work with
this first chap!!
haha, i cannot wait to read more
of this fic!! plz update again soon!! :)

Hi there, welcome back. I really missed you. You must have had quite a writer's block. I hope you're doing okay with "Eternal Freedom"; I thought I sent you an idea for it a while ago. This one is pretty cool; nice improvising with making Azula sweet and the Air Nomads still alive. Anyway hope to see you real soon, good luck with the rest of your stories, keep up the good work and see you later!

I like it but I have some thoughts? Is Azula gonna be a crazy powerful bender? I think you should make Zuko crazy powerful. Is Iroh going to travel with them. I like the idea of Azula not being evil and being a good sister.