Sweet-*sniffle*

Beta-You cry over this?

Divinie-I normally hate Digimon, but in this case, I guess I can sorta like it.

Ari-Damn, that almost made me cry.

Me-It was... so sweet... so personal... Damn, it was good!

susan-*crying* I don't wanna be alone!

Beta-Crybaby...

Me-*whacks Beta on the head**clears throat**puts smile back on* Good poem... Alot better than what I could write...

Wow...this is really good. You were able to make the reader keep reading because they desperately wanted to find out the secret (...and I like the line about them "foolishly trying to keep it from me.") There was an economy of words which I find refreshing in a poem...(means it wasn't too wordy)...great job!