|Reviews for The Doorway to Dawn|
| ironhair 4/10/13 . chapter 4
Why leave it incomplete?
| ironhair 4/10/13 . chapter 2
Nice and interesting so far.
| puiwaihin 3/18/13 . chapter 1
It's a shame this hasn't been updated in 4 or 5 years. I think I originally overlooked this as it is not complete and doesn't look like it will be updated.
In this story Harry is completely swallowed up by Rand. That's understandable, and Rand is certainly a stronger epic hero than Harry, but I would like to have seen more of Harry remaining within the character.
I think your depiction of Rand wiping out Death Eaters as if he were swatting flies is about right. You obviously realized Voldemort would be no match for someone wielding the One Power and have arranged for something to be done to even the odds, but I think the mechanism is a bit clumsy. What Death Eater in his right mind would use his first free wish to give Voldemort the power to kill Harry? Why not wish to become more powerful than Harry and the Dark Lord combined?
And why would Rand/Harry reveal the nature of the Aelfinn and Eelfinn in such detail? That leak of information should have been given more prominence in your narrative.
Your standard of writing is good, no problems there, but the story itself has barely started and there just isn't enough there to really call it a good story. It's a good beginning.
| HeirofSomebodyImportant 11/8/12 . chapter 4
hehe :) He is dead right? D-E-D dead?
More soon please? I love it :D
| Ungodlyone 7/24/12 . chapter 4
| cagna 7/21/12 . chapter 4
i love the story. for some reason i just keep wishing for matt to pop up. i think it's the foxes though. i wonder what would happen if him and perrin were there and perrin's effect, if any, on werewolves. please update soon.
| Estralde 7/5/12 . chapter 4
Fellow DLPer here, wondering if you've permanently dropped this, or if your writing may one day return. I enjoyed the description and character development. It is so rare to see a good WoT/HP crossover..
| Nimbus Llewelyn 6/24/12 . chapter 4
Interesting, and a generally fair assessment of Dumbledore, though it's rather unfair to Snape.
| PlaceholderName 3/31/12 . chapter 4
Excellent story. I fear that it has been abandoned, but I'll favorite and hold out hope that you will one day choose to continue.
| ThwartAbyss54 12/10/11 . chapter 1
HELL YES! *throws fist into air* Ive been thinking about writing a HP/WoT fic glad i can procrastinate on that a little longer :P Ill review again once ive read everything
| Insane Winxy 8/14/11 . chapter 4
C'mon update soon, this story was brilliant.
| Ruhie 5/13/11 . chapter 4
This was brilliant, one of few really good Wheel of Time crossovers out there, I've got one point though, you didn't mention the wolves during the battle of Dumai's Well.
Anyway, great story. Would love to read more.
| Hodemi 5/5/11 . chapter 4
Wow this is an excellent story.
I am a huge fan of the Wheel of Time, and I think the author has captured the characters of Rand and Egwene really well here.
A real shame that this story seems to have been abandoned.
| Snag1 8/2/10 . chapter 4
Ojeez. I see this hasn't seen an update in nigh unto two years, but if you pick this up again, I for one shall not be sorry. And, I'd understand if you didn't, too. Writing Rand, Lews Therin and Harry all into one entity like that must be exhausting. Just contemplating trying to splice those three together makes my brain hurt.
| ErikArden 7/23/10 . chapter 4
With this not having been updated in nearly two year I doubt it will see and update anytime soon, if ever. But I wanted to leave behind a reply to say I hope that something sparks you to continue. This is an amazingly well written story and I love the way you've worked this in. I hope you do update, but if not, all I can do is accept it.