Spectacular! I loved the whole thing, but my favorite part was Wash. his reactions were priceless! XD

Interesting story but not really worth that M-rating (you should watch yourself, people could report you).

GREAT! You make the all story sound almost believable! Nice romance.

Very cute and sweet. I like how the crew was involved in helping Mal to open up. Wash's reaction was hilarious! :D

"Inara's a man? Why wasn't I told?" I love that line of Wash's, but the whole story is so gentle, and works well taking place over some time. And Jayne's speech on what he regrets is just perfect. As for Mal just lying in Jayne's arms ... well, it's not his last night, is it?