Me likey! although it doesn't tie in exactly with the true plot, it is really good! (Just to let you know the girl's name is Krystal who then suspiciously gets trapped in a crystal) I suggest you play the games because they're really good. But, keep writing because you rock!

OMG! The game is AWESOME! You have to play! I have played it over twenty times, and i'm still not bored of it!

i know u don't know da story, but, who da hell is inez?

ALL OF YOU SHUT UP!

to RaymondS, Anonymous, , & Luigi and Yoshi 4ever: THEY CALL IT FAN"FICTION" FOR A REASON! SHE CHANGED THE NAME AND HISTORY ON PURPOSE!

to everyone who wrote NICE things: thankies for being so kind to my friend!

'_'

Actually, the girls name is Krystal.

You made a lot of mistakes...

You made a lot of mistakes...

I thought her name was Krystal? Oh, well. I only played the demo, anyway...

Hmm, I must say, you have a good start going. I'm kinda curious as to why you've renamed Krystal to Inez though. I'd like to see how it turns out.

This is cool! Are you going to do more?

do any of you know when sfa will be released?

You might want to change the name to "Star Fox Adventures", since they dropped the "Dinosaur Planet" from the name, but it's still the setting. Hopefully there will be more SFA fics when the game is released.

This is a list of things you got wrong.

a) Fox and his team never have and probably never will live on Corneria.

b) Falco isn't from the streets. (Why does everyone do that)

c) The story was really stupid.

Ok, nice idea, but please, check your freakin history. Call me a perfectionist, but what's this about pilots from corneria coming before StarFox? And i read in a game description that Pepper sent fox to that planet for some reason or another. I will admit though, this aint all that bad at all.

These things are always good for comparason later. We'll get wait and see.